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Barely Breathing

Claire B.
Barely Breathing
Summary: You can’t become attached to things, because when you become attached you become vulnerable. I’m invisible, to the world I don’t even exist; imagine that I’m like a ghost yet still alive, but barely breathing. In my line of work, it’s necessary.

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kingofwriters said...
Aug. 13, 2014 at 11:01 am
Okay...I'm gonna be honest with you. This is not a bad story by any means, but it does have a lot of flaws. Let's start with the good stuff: Selena was quite an interesting character, and it was cool to read about her dangerous/obsessive tendencies in the beginning. The fact that you didn't exactly tell us why she is killing all these people makes it more intriguing and makes her character deeper and ultimately more interesting, even though I thought you still co... (more »)
kingofwriters replied...
Aug. 13, 2014 at 11:02 am
(Sorry for the extremely long comment :P)
anetblanchard said...
Aug. 2, 2014 at 10:09 am
Awesome!! Interesting and exciting.
ladyduck said...
Jul. 31, 2014 at 11:50 pm
Kept me interested to the end. Liked the descriptive words used throughout. Nicely written. Very good story idea.

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