The Battle of Bloodfire

May 30, 2012
By WolfPup3791 SILVER, Decatur, Indiana
WolfPup3791 SILVER, Decatur, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
Let go Let God


Summary:

Illitatos, the last living member of the Obian people is sent on a quest by a dying friend. Little does Illitatos realize that he will soon have life-changing decisions to make.


Alyssa A.

The Battle of Bloodfire


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on May. 31 2016 at 3:51 pm
WolfPup3791 SILVER, Decatur, Indiana
7 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let go Let God

I have thought about expanding. I feel like this would make a great novel one day. Thank you for taking the time to read it and your kind words :)

on Jun. 10 2015 at 9:57 pm
DawnBreaker BRONZE, Berthoud, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
If you cannot do great things, do small things in a great way.
-Napoleon Hill

I have to say, it is a good story. I definitely see the Tolkien inspiration in there, and it also reminds me of some of the inheritance series. Nice job on this. Have you thought about trying to expand upon this a bit? there is a lot of room to add some more description and lead up. Its a good story either way.




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