Test Subject

November 8, 2011
By Ryter, Warwick, New York
Ryter, Warwick, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Yesterday is History, Tomorrow is a Mystery, and Today is a Gift, that is why it is called the Present.


Summary:

Ivy Lewis is a young sixteen-year-old seducer for BioTech. When she is awakened from her tube session, she is put on multiple missions to enhance the life of the creator of BioTech, until she escapes with the help of Trey, Murphy, and Steve. Soon she will be on a new mission to help destroy BioTech.


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Test Subject


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on Aug. 3 2013 at 8:03 pm
vegetariangirl, Hamilton, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
Being normal is boring - Marilyn Monroe
You only live once -?
A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit -Richard Bach

This is a really great story, I love stuff like this.

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on Nov. 21 2011 at 2:57 pm
BluBliss GOLD, New York, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Bella's love for Edward was like, "Omg. He's hot. He's mine because he sparkles. Now I'll brood the wholle book while I'm with him."

I really like the plot. You're really good wtih naming things and coming up wtih futuristic gadgets and cultural things. I think that you could use more specific detais instead of generalizing events into one paragraph or so. Indirect characterization and all that stuff. Otherwise, i like it.

on Nov. 16 2011 at 6:21 am
Jappyalldayeveryday, Detroit, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
They say that good things take time, but really great things happen in the blink of an eye

This is really good! I think it will make a great book, keep writing!

on Nov. 15 2011 at 1:36 am
AnimaCordis GOLD, London, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Evil is when the good do nothing"

Oh gosh! That's so sad! I really like it, for improvements i would use less rehtorical questions, but maybe that's just me. Otherwise it's wonderful and i want to read on.

on Nov. 14 2011 at 5:20 pm
DoctorWhoFan827347 SILVER, Boise, Idaho
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This is really good! I can't wait to read more.


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