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Summary: Ivy Lewis is a young sixteen-year-old seducer for BioTech. When she is awakened from her tube session, she is put on multiple missions to enhance the life of the creator of BioTech, until she escapes with the help of Trey, Murphy, and Steve. Soon she will be on a new mission to help destroy BioTech.



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vegangirl0725 said...
Aug. 3, 2013 at 8:03 pm
This is a really great story, I love stuff like this.
 
Emiri said...
Nov. 21, 2011 at 2:57 pm
I really like the plot. You're really good wtih naming things and coming up wtih futuristic gadgets and cultural things. I think that you could use more specific detais instead of generalizing events into one paragraph or so. Indirect characterization and all that stuff. Otherwise, i like it.
 
Jappyalldayeveryday said...
Nov. 16, 2011 at 6:21 am
This is really good! I think it will make a great book, keep writing!
 
AnimaCordis said...
Nov. 15, 2011 at 1:36 am
Oh gosh! That's so sad! I really like it, for improvements i would use less rehtorical questions, but maybe that's just me. Otherwise it's wonderful and i want to read on.
 
DoctorWhoFan827347 said...
Nov. 14, 2011 at 5:20 pm
This is really good! I can't wait to read more.
 

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