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The Secret Daughters of the Moon

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The Secret Daughters of the Moon
Summary: Three young girls were left on the steps of an orphanage 13 years ago with a very strange letter. The girls were each adopted by different families and lead seemingly happy lives... then they meet.
When they are together for the first time the Greek Gods begin to show up and send them on an adventure... a very strange adventure.



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Crimson_Lilly said...
Jul. 22, 2011 at 12:12 pm

I really like it so far (Chapter 6), but please be careful about your overlaps. In chapter 5, the conversation between Addi and Arii is different then in chapter 6, but is in the same time frame. Anothe thing, if you could switch Chapter 5 & 6 it would make more sense, since Rorii came before Addi.

Like I said, I really like this story, and I am excited to finish it. :)

 
Angelnight16 said...
May 25, 2011 at 11:43 am
i like the idea and all, but i think you should slow down the pace of the story
 
leah1027 replied...
Jun. 7, 2011 at 3:54 pm
I agree. And also some things seemed a little unlikely. Like Hercules couldn't find the mirror but the girls found it in an hour. Otherwise it was pretty good but i think you could go a lot farther.
 

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