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Ryndel Rochben (Part I)

Nathaniel C.
Ryndel Rochben (Part I)
Summary: Ryndel, a young adult, was staring into the woods one night in autumn. He was unaware about how the events on that night would change him. Morbaror, a new, evil overlord far west, had begun raiding nearby villages and claiming them for himself. Ryndel and his four companions set off to eliminate the evil, searching for others who opposed the overlord. Ryndel never suspected what became of him.

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Ashley_Tucker said...
May 23, 2011 at 2:51 pm
Great idea for a story and beautiful detail. It was so easy for me to picture exactly what the scene looked like. You really have a talent. The only thing you might want to consider is the names. A story reads alot easier when you don't have to stop every other sentence to wonder how to pronounce a name. Although they are cool and fit well with the theme, you might want to look into easier names. Read my novel Shaya's Story, please! And don't forget to rate (:
 

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