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Troubles for my Complication

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Dogma353
Troubles for my Complication
Summary: A girl who has magic running through her veins must learn to control it. But a deep dark secret lies hidden within her. Will she be able to unlock it? What will happen when a dark, mysterious, hot guy comes into the picture?





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Ashley_Tucker said...
May 23, 2011 at 2:41 pm
You seem to just jump into everything in the beginning. Try to explain things on the way, rather than all at once. Rather than explaining what she looks like all in one paragraph,  space it out within the first chapter. Good grammar and punctuation, though! And I love the whole Japan thing (: Read my novel called Shaya's Story, please.
 
Dogma353 replied...
May 27, 2011 at 5:27 am
Yeah, it's not done yet and I plan to change some stuff but I'm still adding to it and all that. And yeah, I'll check out that book :)
 

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