Troubles for my Complication

March 26, 2011
By Dogma353 BRONZE, New Berlin, Wisconsin
Dogma353 BRONZE, New Berlin, Wisconsin
2 articles 4 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
Reaching up to touch the stars, too often does man forget the flowers at their feet.


Summary:

A girl who has magic running through her veins must learn to control it. But a deep dark secret lies hidden within her. Will she be able to unlock it? What will happen when a dark, mysterious, hot guy comes into the picture?


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Troubles for my Complication


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on May. 27 2011 at 5:27 am
Dogma353 BRONZE, New Berlin, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
Reaching up to touch the stars, too often does man forget the flowers at their feet.

Yeah, it's not done yet and I plan to change some stuff but I'm still adding to it and all that. And yeah, I'll check out that book :)

on May. 23 2011 at 2:41 pm
Ashley_Tucker, Granger, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
Of course it is happening inside your head, Harry, but why on earth should that mean that it is not real? ~ Albus Dumbledore

You seem to just jump into everything in the beginning. Try to explain things on the way, rather than all at once. Rather than explaining what she looks like all in one paragraph,  space it out within the first chapter. Good grammar and punctuation, though! And I love the whole Japan thing (: Read my novel called Shaya's Story, please.


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