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The Raven

Ken B.
The Raven
Summary: A moonlight massacre of a group of soldiers. A man bent on avenging the death of his wife. Another seeking to start a new life and settle down. A murderer who, in the end, seeks to repent. A young girl who saves the world. They all come together in an epic tale of fantasy and adventure, mystery, love, death, life, revenge, and a plot to rule the world.

Tags: death/loss

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PJD17 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 23, 2011 at 5:52 pm
Great story  really well written  could you please take a look at my story  Manso's Shame adn comment on it
ravenpen said...
Feb. 5, 2011 at 6:18 pm
This is pretty good. I like the way you separated the chapters into parts. And the scene where Storm tells off that guy is very well done. How long did it take you to write? How much time have you spent editing? I am currently attempting to edit a novel I just finished and it is pretty painful. I find myself doing anything to get away from spending an hour with my story. I'll get it done eventually. Hopefully. 
KLPutnam replied...
Feb. 5, 2011 at 6:24 pm
I started this piece...in like August, I think. This is the draft I had as of late January. Not completely done yet. I've gotten nearly everyone I know to edit this, from my grandmother to my girlfriend.
ravenpen replied...
Feb. 5, 2011 at 6:45 pm
Wow. I've only let my best friend read my story and it was hard to give it to even her. 
Timekeeper This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 29, 2011 at 11:38 am

Wow, this is cool! I love how long your chapters are, it really feels like a novel. I could definitely see this getting published one day...do you plan it to be one novel or an entire series?


Please check out my novel "SuperNOVA" and leave your thoughts on it! :D

KLPutnam replied...
Jan. 29, 2011 at 11:47 am

Thanks! I hope to publish it someday. I think I'm going to leave it open for a sequel, and decide then if I want to write one.

I'll definitely check out your novel, thanks for the feedback.

Timekeeper This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jan. 29, 2011 at 12:01 pm
Leaving it open to a sequel might be your best bet, sometimes it's better to move onto a new subject before trying to immediately return back to a finished novel and deciding to write a sequel that would have to top it.

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