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Morning Orange

I spotted Gia up ahead. She hadn’t gotten far at all, and although she was hobbling as quickly as she could, she had only made it halfway through the woods. Ori was slowing me down. I was almost dragging him, because his little legs could only move so fast. The Police were smart enough not to run after us on foot. I heard them stepping into Hovers.

Ori and I had almost reached the forest. I could see Gia, and she saw the alarm in my eyes. I started to cough, but I forced my legs to move. I yanked my brother alongside me.

I wanted to cry when I heard their Hovers stir to life. Even the simplest mental math revealed that we had no way to outrun them. But now we had entered the forest.

Gia had stopped on the other side.

I shouted, “Go! Gia, run!”

The Hovers were right behind us. I’d never seen them navigate through trees before.

“Run, Ori!”

We froze. I tried to move. I used all my strength, but my muscles were like molasses, and what little motion I could make did not move my body at all. It took me a moment to recognize that pitch ringing in my ears. Only then did I notice that I was suspended above the ground. My neck bent as slowly as honey drops from a jar. My whole body was glowing orange. I had been shot by float gun. Even without turning my head, I knew my brother had been too.

I prayed that Gia would escape. But the other Hover went straight toward her, and she froze by herself, simply out of fear. They floated her anyway. That was the last thing I remembered.




I awoke in an Auto. Ori drooled on my arm, asleep, his hands bound just like mine. I was extremely uncomfortable. They hadn’t bothered to take off our packs before they bound our wrists. On my left Gia was wide awake. Her eyes flitted around the Auto, intently staring out the window and at the Policemen’s faces. She had a determined look on her face, an intensity characteristic of her. She was learning everything she could, and her motives were unmistakable.

She shot me a warning glance that told me to keep quiet. I looked out the window. The lights that I guessed to be National City were just a speck on a dark horizon. The sky had a look of early morning. I knew that soon the sun would rise.

The Policemen laughed. One of them sipped a beverage from a mug.

“A royal pain, that one,” the driver joked.

The other nodded. “Without a doubt. But she has a plan for everything.” He almost whispered when he added, “I’d be afraid contradict her.”

Ori woke with a start. “Arcana,” he whimpered, “where are we?”

The driver turned around, “Well look who’s up!” He was eerily cheerful.

The other swallowed. I almost jumped when I realized that I recognized him. He knew my dad.

Gia addressed the second, and I knew that she recognized him too. “Where are we going?”

He didn’t answer. The driver grinned. “We’re going on a little adventure. You’re going farther from the National City than you’ve ever been!”

“How far are we, exactly?” Gia asked politely, still addressing the second Policeman.

The driver laughed. “Nearly a thousand miles, kids! And what do you know? Here’s our stop.” Traveling at top speed an Auto could cover about 250 miles per hour. I tried to recall my geography, but I had thought that all this was just wasted space.

The Auto landed quickly.

“All right you kids, out!” the driver said with a wide grin.

Obediently, we grabbed our bags and slowly descended to the ground. I hugged Ori to my side as best I could with my hands bound together.

The first Policeman rolled down his window as the second opened his door. He approached us, carrying a weapon meant for only one purpose. The three of us faced the two of them, and I shuddered in a moment of terrible understanding.

“Alright kids,” the first Policeman said out the window. “Everyone turn around.”

Ori looked up at me.

“Kids, turn around now.”

Gia interrupted, softly. She looked at the second man only, undaunted by the gun. “What’s going to happen to us, Mr. Lumberton?” That was his name! I had been trying to remember.

He seemed startled that she knew it.

Mr. Lumberton muttered something incoherent.

“Turn around!” the first Policeman barked, clearly annoyed at Lumberton’s lack of professionalism. “Pete, just do it.”

“Mr. Lumberton,” Gia said softly. “Are you going to kill us?”

Mr. Lumberton rubbed his temple, but then returned his hand to his weapon.

“Shut up!” the first Policeman yelled. “Pete just get it -- ”

But he never finished his sentence. Lumberton pushed a button on his uniform and his colleague fell unconscious on the controls.

I had no idea he had it in him. Mr. Lumberton stepped back. Apparently neither did he.

“Run!” he muttered to us, wiping his dripping brow, and quickly he returned to the Auto and started tapping away at the controls.

We didn’t hesitate. I never looked back as we darted into the trees.

It was difficult to run without the balance of our arms, but we managed to sprint until we were well out of sight.

The sun just peeked over the horizon and brilliant streaks painted the sky. I felt the cautious freedom of the nearly rising sun. Mr. Lumberton had to have known the danger he made for himself. Ori and Gia were both safe! We had all survived! I smiled to myself. I supposed the world does seem darkest just before the dawn.

A loud voice made Ori jump. “Nobody move!” A huge dark figure stepped out from the trees. His weapon was loaded. His tone left no room for argument. “You’re all coming with me.”
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BrielleM-JustAnotherOwl-This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 25, 2011 at 7:47 pm:
Hehe. Now I'm just pathetically waiting until new chapters are up...
 
EmilyGram replied...
Mar. 30, 2011 at 3:02 pm :
I'm so glad!  I will be posting chapters 13-16 very soon! :)  Thanks for all your votes and support!
 
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Medina D. said...
Mar. 21, 2011 at 2:51 pm:

oh, and i forgot to say i love how almost all the chapters are named after colors. i got caught in the story, i felt like i knew all the characters right away. And it was cool how instead of starting the story with a huge introduction, you just started the scene.

Ok, NOW I'm officially done with my feedback :)

i'll be sure to buy this book in barnes and noble!! ;)

 
EmilyGram replied...
Mar. 21, 2011 at 9:52 pm :
Thank you thank you thank you thank you.  This comment really made my day.  Thank you!
 
Medina D. replied...
Mar. 22, 2011 at 11:44 am :
your welcome :D
 
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Medina D. said...
Mar. 21, 2011 at 2:49 pm:

Hi Emily. Thanks so much for asking me to read your story!! i enjoyed reading every chapter. You have excellent writing skills, i tell you. Of all the nice novels i imagine on the shelves of bookstores, this one would fit right in. The words weave together so beautifully. You say so much in so little words. The story.........how it was written........when i read the summary i knew it was going to be a good story. This is authentic sci fi right here. I'm enchanted, impressed. WOW *rubs eyes in... (more »)

 
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mummers4 said...
Mar. 20, 2011 at 6:29 am:

Dear EGRAM

Yesterday, I reread the first 8 chapters of your story and then read your latest chapters.  Your latest chapters are as outstanding as the first 8.  Your characters have life and involve the reader with their problems and feelings. I can't wait to read more. This book should certainly be published!

 
EmilyGram replied...
Mar. 21, 2011 at 9:52 pm :
Thank you, mummers4, for all your feedback and support!
 
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lotrisamazing said...
Mar. 19, 2011 at 7:01 pm:
This is so good! I am not very far but I want to keep reading because I need to know what happens! It is very well written, not choppy, not overdone, and I like the perspective and setting!
 
EmilyGram replied...
Mar. 21, 2011 at 9:51 pm :
Thank you!  I'm glad you like it!
 
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PJD17 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 18, 2011 at 8:10 pm:
i'm very impresed with this story  i read the whole thing in one sitting, and couldnt get enough of it,  i love the way the characters are written, and the story flows marvelously  i'm not much of a sci fye fan, but i greatly enjoyed this story  keep it up!
 
EmilyGram replied...
Mar. 21, 2011 at 9:51 pm :
Thank you so much.  You commented on all of my TeenInk writings and I'm so grateful for that!  Your feedback is so encouraging, and I can't thank you enough.
 
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koolwords said...
Mar. 17, 2011 at 6:21 pm:

well, this is one of those "oh my goodness" stories. It's really well thought out, and the more I read the more I like.

 

I think the romantic part is really nice, and the almost kind of secrecy behind everything is cool too.

 

I haven't finished yet (becuase of that evil thing called school) but I can't wait to read more.

 
EmilyGram replied...
Mar. 21, 2011 at 9:50 pm :
Thank you.  I really appreciate your comment, and if you do get a chance to finish it, please let me know what you think of the rest! :)
 
koolwords replied...
Mar. 22, 2011 at 6:43 am :

Hey I finished it and it was really good.

I liked how there was this kind of twist were you aren't sure who's the bad guy. Then the whole thing about the society's laws about no outsiders. It's just cool.

 

Keep writing because I'm sure we're all waiting for the end and we all would rather have it sooner then later.

 

Rock on!

 
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star3x8 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 16, 2011 at 6:26 pm:

Wow! This is really good! You got my attention from the very beginning, when you explained that Ori has a "sense", for a lack of better word. And then you have a scene where both parents die. You have a great start- and I just finished chapter 1.

Great job! I'll definitely continue reading.

 
EmilyGram replied...
Mar. 16, 2011 at 9:15 pm :
Thank you!  Please let me know what you think of the rest!  I look forward to your comments!
 
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BrielleMThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 14, 2011 at 7:04 pm:
This is insanely great! I could definitely see it as a published book. I love the characters. I'm only on the seventh chapter, but I'm already sold on it. (:
 
BrielleMThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Mar. 16, 2011 at 4:44 pm :
Alright. Done. Could you please post more? It's so amazing and now I really want to know what will happen! (:
 
EmilyGram replied...
Mar. 16, 2011 at 9:14 pm :
I'm so glad you've finished it and commented!  I have decided to post the next four chapters on Monday (Mar 21) so they should be online by the following weekend!  Please comment again after you read them...I would love to hear what you think!
 
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