Celestial

December 28, 2010
By lovelycheese GOLD, Cupertino, California
lovelycheese GOLD, Cupertino, California
11 articles 0 photos 136 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you have something to do, then do it. You can't get wasted time back." ~Ben Carson.


Summary:

Celestials and their ancient legacy have disappeared with time's passing.
Summer is one of the last remaining Celestials in the entire land of King Lance and King Slade. Once she's discovered and brought before King Slade, her Element - Fire - is taken advantage of. While Summer's being juggled between two Kingdoms, no one notices as a third Kingdom arises.
And who is the King? Not a man. It's Summer's long lost mother.
Stuck in between the Kingdoms, it's up to Summer to decide the fate of all the Kingdoms - once and for all.


lovelycheese

Celestial


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on Jun. 9 2011 at 1:05 pm
lovelycheese GOLD, Cupertino, California
11 articles 0 photos 136 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you have something to do, then do it. You can't get wasted time back." ~Ben Carson.

Again I apologize immensely for super late comment, but I commented on Pulsing Blue. Hope my feedback helped! 

on Jun. 8 2011 at 9:29 pm
lovelycheese GOLD, Cupertino, California
11 articles 0 photos 136 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you have something to do, then do it. You can't get wasted time back." ~Ben Carson.

Whoa, that's amazing to hear. Thank you. I'd love to read your work. Which section is it in?

on Jun. 4 2011 at 1:55 pm
CheshireKat_95 BRONZE, Cambridge, Minnesota
2 articles 3 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I do not want people to be very agreeable, as it saves me the trouble of liking them a great deal."
- Jane Austen, letter to Cassandra Austen, 24 December 1798

Anytime. I always try to make sure good writers know they're good. :)

Klassian said...
on Jun. 3 2011 at 3:02 pm
Klassian, West, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Huh???...what???...OOOOOO!!!!
-me!

I'm new to teen ink and after reading your work I felt inspired. I had written some books on my own but I've finally worked up the courage to put them up on teen ink. Your an amazing writer and if you don't mind will you please look at my book My Life As A Goddess.

on May. 28 2011 at 8:04 pm
lovelycheese GOLD, Cupertino, California
11 articles 0 photos 136 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you have something to do, then do it. You can't get wasted time back." ~Ben Carson.

Cooool. Tell me when you do. (:

on May. 28 2011 at 7:53 pm
Plush_Baneling BRONZE, Denver, Colorado
2 articles 0 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I will devour the world, after that the universe, and when there is nothing but me, I will devour myself"
ME!

Ill be posting it in the next few weeks

(probably)


on May. 24 2011 at 10:19 pm
lovelycheese GOLD, Cupertino, California
11 articles 0 photos 136 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you have something to do, then do it. You can't get wasted time back." ~Ben Carson.

Sorry for the slow reply, but I read and commented. (: Great job.

on May. 24 2011 at 10:00 pm
lovelycheese GOLD, Cupertino, California
11 articles 0 photos 136 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you have something to do, then do it. You can't get wasted time back." ~Ben Carson.

Whoa, that's cool. I'd love to hear about your story sometime. Thanks, too. (:

on May. 24 2011 at 4:09 pm
Plush_Baneling BRONZE, Denver, Colorado
2 articles 0 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I will devour the world, after that the universe, and when there is nothing but me, I will devour myself"
ME!

m writing a book with a race of people that have allot of the same things, and I havnt read this untill now, just kinda interesting to me. Also, its VERY good

on May. 20 2011 at 5:31 pm
lovelycheese GOLD, Cupertino, California
11 articles 0 photos 136 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you have something to do, then do it. You can't get wasted time back." ~Ben Carson.

Thank you!

frankie said...
on May. 19 2011 at 12:08 pm

Emensly extravagant if i must say

 


on May. 16 2011 at 2:51 pm
leaf44 PLATINUM, Rehoboth, Massachusetts
20 articles 0 photos 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Truth is stranger than fiction because fiction has to make sense."
"Be careful, or you'll end up in my novel."

They're both in scifi/fantasy but The Other Time is pretty long so if you don't have time to read it I get it. 

on May. 16 2011 at 1:30 am
Garnet77 PLATINUM, Sinagpore, Other
31 articles 6 photos 578 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everything's a triangle." ~ My mother

"Write what you love, write what you care about, because sometimes, it's the easiest way to be heard."

I just submitted a new chapter, but it should be up under recent novels in the scifi/fantasy section soon :)

on May. 15 2011 at 10:51 pm
lovelycheese GOLD, Cupertino, California
11 articles 0 photos 136 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you have something to do, then do it. You can't get wasted time back." ~Ben Carson.

Yeah, I'll review it as soon as possible. I just got back from Disneyland a couple of hours ago and I'm dead tired. Which genre is it in? It saves me a bit time looking. :D

on May. 15 2011 at 10:50 pm
lovelycheese GOLD, Cupertino, California
11 articles 0 photos 136 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you have something to do, then do it. You can't get wasted time back." ~Ben Carson.

That means a lot to me. Thank you. I'll try defeating writer's block. That's exactly what I need and what I'm looking for. 

Yay. I've been writing [terribly] ever since I can remember, and I'm glad to see that it's finally gone somewhere. (: Thanks!


on May. 15 2011 at 10:47 pm
lovelycheese GOLD, Cupertino, California
11 articles 0 photos 136 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you have something to do, then do it. You can't get wasted time back." ~Ben Carson.

Sure, I'll get to that as soon as I finish fighting with time. Which section is it in? 

Thank you for the comment! (:


on May. 11 2011 at 2:37 pm
leaf44 PLATINUM, Rehoboth, Massachusetts
20 articles 0 photos 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Truth is stranger than fiction because fiction has to make sense."
"Be careful, or you'll end up in my novel."

That was really good!  Your descriptions were great and you move at a good speed.  I agree with other comments about the dioulog though.  You probably get this a lot, but i would love it if you could read my novels Pulsing Blue (part 1)  and The Other Time.

on May. 7 2011 at 10:00 pm
CheshireKat_95 BRONZE, Cambridge, Minnesota
2 articles 3 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I do not want people to be very agreeable, as it saves me the trouble of liking them a great deal."
- Jane Austen, letter to Cassandra Austen, 24 December 1798

Bleh. ReplyFail. That was supposed to be a reply!!

on May. 7 2011 at 9:59 pm
CheshireKat_95 BRONZE, Cambridge, Minnesota
2 articles 3 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I do not want people to be very agreeable, as it saves me the trouble of liking them a great deal."
- Jane Austen, letter to Cassandra Austen, 24 December 1798

Oh yes. The dreaded writer's block: bane of every writer's existence. However, I find that if you force yourself into the mindset that I CAN write, I CAN write, I CAN and MUST and WILL write, then usually something will come, even if what comes is a little random and unexpected.

I look forward to reading more of your writing; you have a talent. And ask anyone who knows me--those words aren't heard(or read!) often.

Hope your writer's block goes away soon!!


on May. 7 2011 at 9:53 pm
Garnet77 PLATINUM, Sinagpore, Other
31 articles 6 photos 578 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everything's a triangle." ~ My mother

"Write what you love, write what you care about, because sometimes, it's the easiest way to be heard."

No problem :) Do you think you could check out my novel? It’s not finished yet, but I’d like some feedback on what I have so far. It’s called ‘Wandering Soul’. You could probably find it under recent novels section.. :)


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