Celestial

December 28, 2010
By lovelycheese GOLD, Cupertino, California
lovelycheese GOLD, Cupertino, California
11 articles 0 photos 136 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you have something to do, then do it. You can't get wasted time back." ~Ben Carson.


Summary:

Celestials and their ancient legacy have disappeared with time's passing.
Summer is one of the last remaining Celestials in the entire land of King Lance and King Slade. Once she's discovered and brought before King Slade, her Element - Fire - is taken advantage of. While Summer's being juggled between two Kingdoms, no one notices as a third Kingdom arises.
And who is the King? Not a man. It's Summer's long lost mother.
Stuck in between the Kingdoms, it's up to Summer to decide the fate of all the Kingdoms - once and for all.


lovelycheese

Celestial


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on Nov. 25 2011 at 3:13 am
lovelycheese GOLD, Cupertino, California
11 articles 0 photos 136 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you have something to do, then do it. You can't get wasted time back." ~Ben Carson.

Thank you! (: 

Mickylayla said...
on Nov. 23 2011 at 11:49 am
This is a fantastic plot. Truly memorizing. If I were you, I'd send this to a publisher or something. :)

on Nov. 22 2011 at 8:38 pm
Sophia.Veritas SILVER, Na, California
8 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
Jane Eyre:

"You examine me, Ms. Eyre. Do you think me handsome?"
...
"No, sir."

By the way, medieval fantasies are a sort of addiction for me, but then I was saddened to learn my favorite author was aging and might not make it to the sequel (T.T)

Thanks for this~

I needed another fantasy world...<3


on Nov. 22 2011 at 8:36 pm
Sophia.Veritas SILVER, Na, California
8 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
Jane Eyre:

"You examine me, Ms. Eyre. Do you think me handsome?"
...
"No, sir."

Gratz, you wrote a book I actually read through on this site

Zeeny PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 21 2011 at 7:09 am
Zeeny PLATINUM, Staten Island, New York
37 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"When someone truly cares about you, they make an effort not an excuse"

Wow, this book was quite intersting. I actually  was interested. You see, i was submitting my own story to the Teen Ink magazine, but someow someone claimed it wasn't a good story for teens. So they deleted the file. I was upst but gotta keep trying. Are yo u going to black friday?

on Oct. 29 2011 at 7:46 pm
cantdeleteaccounthelp, Sey, West Virginia
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I really loved this book! I've always liked fantasy stories, and this book is really really nice. You should finish it. This might be a great book. I love the form in which the story is being developed. I repeat it: I love this book!

pablo45 said...
on Oct. 28 2011 at 11:34 am
wow this sounds like an amazing book

on Oct. 27 2011 at 7:59 pm
lovelycheese GOLD, Cupertino, California
11 articles 0 photos 136 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you have something to do, then do it. You can't get wasted time back." ~Ben Carson.

Good question! Haha. I really don't know. I'm a pretty big procrastinator, and school's more than a mouthful. Truthfully, I don't have any plans to continue this. I have a rough sketch of what's going to happen, but I don't believe I'll be posting anymore for now. But since November is National Novel Writing Month... hey, I might pick it up again, who knows? 

Good luck on yours and keep writing! :]


on Oct. 27 2011 at 7:52 pm
Plush_Baneling BRONZE, Denver, Colorado
2 articles 0 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I will devour the world, after that the universe, and when there is nothing but me, I will devour myself"
ME!

When do you plan to post more? (also the oneIm working on is getting along, but my laptop died)

on Oct. 26 2011 at 7:14 pm
lovelycheese GOLD, Cupertino, California
11 articles 0 photos 136 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you have something to do, then do it. You can't get wasted time back." ~Ben Carson.

Thanks so much! :]

on Oct. 22 2011 at 6:31 pm
cloud_creater, Birch Run, Michigan
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I absolutly loved it!!!!!! THis is just the kind of book i hlove!!!! keep it up!!

on Oct. 18 2011 at 10:21 pm
lovelycheese GOLD, Cupertino, California
11 articles 0 photos 136 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you have something to do, then do it. You can't get wasted time back." ~Ben Carson.

Thank you for your time reading Celestial and for such lovely comments! :]

on Oct. 17 2011 at 2:48 pm
JustCallMeSarah BRONZE, Iowa Falls, Iowa
1 article 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
'What is faith without trust?'
~ Adam Young

Loved it! keep writing, this is great!

on Sep. 30 2011 at 8:41 am
CallmeKrista BRONZE, Newont, Massachusetts
4 articles 0 photos 4 comments
No problem!

on Sep. 28 2011 at 9:16 pm
lovelycheese GOLD, Cupertino, California
11 articles 0 photos 136 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you have something to do, then do it. You can't get wasted time back." ~Ben Carson.

Thank you! It means so much to me.

on Sep. 28 2011 at 1:26 pm
CallmeKrista BRONZE, Newont, Massachusetts
4 articles 0 photos 4 comments
I really like this so far! I've become a huge fan of syfy and thriller movies and books and all that stuff and this is one of the best book's I've read on this site so far.  Keep up the good work!

on Sep. 24 2011 at 6:23 am
juliam PLATINUM, Windermere, Florida
21 articles 4 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
All of us learn to write in second grade. Most of us go on to greater things

I thought the way you put the history in there was really unique. I've never really seen it done that way. I was just thinking like, where else would you put it?

on Sep. 24 2011 at 6:21 am
juliam PLATINUM, Windermere, Florida
21 articles 4 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
All of us learn to write in second grade. Most of us go on to greater things

My novel is called "A Lost Boy's Life" About the details... It'd just that, by adding more details, you make it more real to the reader. It's not to "add more life" per say, but to allow the reader to really envision themselves in there with yor characters, relate to them, sympathize with them. Does that make sense?

on Sep. 23 2011 at 9:05 pm
lovelycheese GOLD, Cupertino, California
11 articles 0 photos 136 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you have something to do, then do it. You can't get wasted time back." ~Ben Carson.

I want to cut that whole, fat history block out of the third chapter, and make it flow better with the story. In fact, when I get the chance, I'm going to be changing the whole story pretty dramatically. 

Sorry for the ambuguity! 


on Sep. 23 2011 at 9:03 pm
lovelycheese GOLD, Cupertino, California
11 articles 0 photos 136 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you have something to do, then do it. You can't get wasted time back." ~Ben Carson.

Oh, your review - what's your novel called? Before I could easily scan through the novels and find titles... but now, there's so many. :]

I'll definitely take your advice. So, more details to add more life? I was a little confused about that part, but thanks!





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