Celestial

December 28, 2010
By lovelycheese GOLD, Cupertino, California
lovelycheese GOLD, Cupertino, California
11 articles 0 photos 136 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you have something to do, then do it. You can't get wasted time back." ~Ben Carson.


Summary:

Celestials and their ancient legacy have disappeared with time's passing.
Summer is one of the last remaining Celestials in the entire land of King Lance and King Slade. Once she's discovered and brought before King Slade, her Element - Fire - is taken advantage of. While Summer's being juggled between two Kingdoms, no one notices as a third Kingdom arises.
And who is the King? Not a man. It's Summer's long lost mother.
Stuck in between the Kingdoms, it's up to Summer to decide the fate of all the Kingdoms - once and for all.


lovelycheese

Celestial


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on Oct. 30 2012 at 7:37 pm
Crunchman99 SILVER, Mitchell, South Dakota
9 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
Writing can often be complex, and some people don't ever practice. The important thing is, when you get good at it, few things can help you more in life.

I'm lovin it. No, not McDonalds, this story! I have to say, man, you've got some talent there. I can't wait to see where this story goes. Also check out Fabula Imperium, which is living in this story's gigantic shadow. I think I'm a great writer, but still this story trumps it by far. It happens to be on my somehow-incomplete-even-after-a-week profile page too.  

on Oct. 15 2012 at 4:28 am
Vagabond SILVER, New Delhi, Other
8 articles 0 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
Every end is a new beginning;
What a caterpillar calls an end the rest of the world calls a butterfly;
"Begining are normally sacary endings are normally sad,
it's in the middle which makes life worth living"

hI I REALLY ENJOYED IT... please read my new book "A new era" and give me your feedbacks! thanks!! :D

Suddenly said...
on Sep. 28 2012 at 7:34 pm
This is great! You are a wonderful writer! I cannot wait for more. 

on Sep. 13 2012 at 9:23 am
BreakAwayFromMe, Big Island, Other
0 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'm scared to get close and I hate being alone.
I long for that feeling to not feel at all.
The higher I get, the lower I'll sink.
I can't drown my demons, they know how to swim." --"Can you Feel My Heart" BMTH

I absolutely love Celestial, you gonna put more in soon?

on Aug. 24 2012 at 1:55 pm
liveamongthestarsdieamongthepeople GOLD, Kalamazoo, Michigan
18 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
Why I am here, I know not; where I shall go, it is useless to enquire. In the midst of myriads of the living and the dead worlds, stars, and infinity why should I be anxious of an atom?
-Lord Byron

Write more!

on Aug. 16 2012 at 10:49 pm
liveamongthestarsdieamongthepeople GOLD, Kalamazoo, Michigan
18 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
Why I am here, I know not; where I shall go, it is useless to enquire. In the midst of myriads of the living and the dead worlds, stars, and infinity why should I be anxious of an atom?
-Lord Byron

I really like this. Its detailed, descriptive and mysterious. Was super disappointed when it ended on page 3!

RynKep SILVER said...
on Jun. 17 2012 at 12:18 pm
RynKep SILVER, Bloomington, Indiana
6 articles 0 photos 2 comments
I really like Celestial, I'm a big fan of people who do what they love without worrying about others' opinions.

gavinbob said...
on Jun. 15 2012 at 12:14 pm
gavinbob, Springville, Utah
0 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You have not failed until you quit trying" -Gordon B. Hinckley-

So far I've only read the first chapter, but I'm already hooked. I love the way it starts. Intrueging and mysterious.  

on May. 30 2012 at 6:44 pm
lovelycheese GOLD, Cupertino, California
11 articles 0 photos 136 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you have something to do, then do it. You can't get wasted time back." ~Ben Carson.

Hmm... I haven't thought about that. Or maybe I have, but I forgot. Haha it's been a long time! I will definitely consider continuing Celestial over the summer when school's out. Thank you ^__^

on May. 30 2012 at 6:27 pm
Fantasy100 BRONZE, Bronx, New York
2 articles 0 photos 6 comments
Is ther going to be a sequel? I loved it

on May. 28 2012 at 3:51 pm
KJAngelAuthor SILVER, Holland, Michigan
7 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
With understanding comes wisdom.

I AGREE 100 PERCENT!!! It's amazing, and I WANT MORE!!! :D!!!!!

on May. 23 2012 at 8:52 am
BekahBekah BRONZE, Xian, Other
3 articles 0 photos 21 comments
I know you get lots of comments saying "OMG I LOVE YOUR STORY SO MUCH" and stuff, and my comment probably won't be any different.. XDD But really, I just wanted to say that I really like yoru story, and it inspired me to keep going on my own fantasy story. :DD It actually got some ideas started up in my mind.. THank you! :DD Anyways, really, keep pressing on! It's really a great story. I wouldn't be surprised if it got published and became a bestseller! :))) I mean it. 

on Mar. 31 2012 at 12:23 am
livingparadox GOLD, Dhaka, Other
10 articles 0 photos 7 comments

You're welcome! 

Ps: You moght wanna check out my articles ! :)) xx


on Mar. 27 2012 at 9:42 pm
lovelycheese GOLD, Cupertino, California
11 articles 0 photos 136 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you have something to do, then do it. You can't get wasted time back." ~Ben Carson.

I'm waaay overdue for many book critique requests. I'm really sorry. I'm still not used to the workload of high school! Haha. 

However long you critique my books/articles, the same length I'll put into yours. I'm sorry, but it's only fair. I just don't do copy-and-paste self promotion, but again this is a writing website, so I will check it out whenever I can. 


on Mar. 27 2012 at 9:38 pm
lovelycheese GOLD, Cupertino, California
11 articles 0 photos 136 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you have something to do, then do it. You can't get wasted time back." ~Ben Carson.

Sorry for the late reply - been busy! But thanks for reading. (:

on Mar. 27 2012 at 9:38 pm
lovelycheese GOLD, Cupertino, California
11 articles 0 photos 136 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you have something to do, then do it. You can't get wasted time back." ~Ben Carson.

Thanks! Teen Ink is a great place for aspiring writers; hope you enjoy! (:

on Mar. 27 2012 at 9:36 pm
lovelycheese GOLD, Cupertino, California
11 articles 0 photos 136 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you have something to do, then do it. You can't get wasted time back." ~Ben Carson.

Thank you! 

rose98 DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 27 2012 at 5:48 pm
rose98 DIAMOND, Ada, Oklahoma
54 articles 1 photo 2 comments
I love your story! You describe everything with great detail!

on Mar. 26 2012 at 1:35 pm
Roseatta BRONZE, Merritt Island, Florida
4 articles 12 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you can't dazzle them with your brilliance, baffle them with your bullcrap"~ Russ

This is the first thing I've read on here, and it's really great! I love how you capture the feeling, makes the reader feel very 'into the moment' :)

scottybear said...
on Feb. 4 2012 at 5:58 pm
scottybear, Los Angeles, California
0 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"Nothing is the end of the world...except the (actual) end of the world."
Stuff happens; you need to accept that fact, and move on. If you spend too much time in worry and fear, it leaves no time for living.

Dear lovelycheese, Hi, I liked your story very much. Would you be interesting in checking out some of my work? I have a sci-fi, teen fiction story series I'm working on. There are three episodes completed. It's called "Storm Chasers". It's under the 'recently added' tab, or you can simply click on my username: scottybear. How would you like to be an angel, given power and control over the weather?


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