Teen Ink

You're welcome! 

Ps: You moght wanna check out my articles ! :)) xx

I'm waaay overdue for many book critique requests. I'm really sorry. I'm still not used to the workload of high school! Haha. 

However long you critique my books/articles, the same length I'll put into yours. I'm sorry, but it's only fair. I just don't do copy-and-paste self promotion, but again this is a writing website, so I will check it out whenever I can. 

By the way, medieval fantasies are a sort of addiction for me, but then I was saddened to learn my favorite author was aging and might not make it to the sequel (T.T)

Thanks for this~

I needed another fantasy world...<3

Thank you! 

Yeah, reality always catches up on us, doesn't it? (: I love inventing my own worlds where everything's possible. Thanks for reading. (:

Thanks! (: I wrote this well over a year ago, so I'm hoping my writing has improved. I've never gotten around to continuing more than this, sadly. Random question, but nope. It's Black Friday right now! (: 

Don't give up hope. Always write about something that you love, because that's timeless and wonderful. And thanks again! (:

Good question! Haha. I really don't know. I'm a pretty big procrastinator, and school's more than a mouthful. Truthfully, I don't have any plans to continue this. I have a rough sketch of what's going to happen, but I don't believe I'll be posting anymore for now. But since November is National Novel Writing Month... hey, I might pick it up again, who knows? 

Good luck on yours and keep writing! :]

Actually, the mythological part was what I was trying to stray away from. Frankly that matter doesn't interest me, but I was looking for a challenge to instill some modernized things into a story along with fantasy and paranormal elements. 

The Great Arks? Gates legend? I've never heard of them. I've just started high school, so it might be a while before I actually learn about that stuff. Unless you're talking about the National Treasure movie or something... Haha, I'm joking. Th... (more »)

I understand.

Could you be more specific? Which parts of the story did not appeal to you? The general idea of fantasy, or the characters, the plot...? If you gave me some more details, I could definitely fix some things up.

But I was just wondering, if you didn't like fantasy (and it seems so, excuse me for assuming) what brought you to this story? I was hoping by clearly stating "Kingdom" and "Celestials" that it would give the potential reader an idea of which genre this book ... (more »)