In the End

September 10, 2013
By LexSlaitor, batavia, Ohio
LexSlaitor, Batavia, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
Don't have one!


Summary:

There is an inmate for a prison that is clinically insane, and a government agent goes to the prison to inform the inmate of a chance of his lifetime.


Sean B.

In the End


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LexSlaitor said...
on Sep. 23 2013 at 8:20 am
LexSlaitor, Batavia, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
Don't have one!

Thanks! I tried very hard to come up with a concept; and I have never read The Hunger Games, so I had no idea what the concept was for that specific series.

on Sep. 22 2013 at 10:53 am
Kestrel135 PLATINUM, Waterford, Connecticut
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"Respect existence or expect resistance"

This is a very interesting story. I like your writing style; it is honest and real, but with the panic and frightening reality inside the character's head grandly protrayed (sp?). But I can't help but be reminded of the Hunger Games in this - just with criminals, which I quite honestly think is an interesting twist. Still though, it is an amazing peice of work. Don't lose spirit ,and keep writing!

on Sep. 22 2013 at 10:44 am
Kestrel135 PLATINUM, Waterford, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
"Respect existence or expect resistance"

I am going to read it really quick, but just first off, they don't actually lable the chapters. Just 'pg 1' or 'pg 2' representing the chapters. For future reference, you can make the prlogue in place of 'pg 1/ "chp 1"' and then make 'pg 2' the real chapter one. That's what I do. :)

LexSlaitor said...
on Sep. 20 2013 at 1:16 pm
LexSlaitor, Batavia, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
Don't have one!

I am currently writing the second chapter




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