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Ch.4

“The world suffers a lot.
Not because of the violence of bad people.
But because of the silence of good people.”
-Napoleon

It all happened in 15 seconds as if my life is shattered. I know what ‘hide out’ means. It means no normal life, no school fun, no chatting freely, no nothing. No more fun, usual life, the life that was boring that I was, am and have always been scared to leave it. Billions of thoughts were running in my mind. How can this happen? Are they serious? How long will the hide out last? Will the Earthians leave? “We have arranged with some people…we’ll be staying at their home until the place is safe.”
Seriously?
Some people?
How is this happening…so suddenly? it seems like a nightmare to me. It will take me forever to recover from this shock…or maybe never…I started packing my items. Mom, dad, Mr. and Mrs. Parker were all discussing something. I felt really very creepy.
30 MINUTES LATER
Everything was ready. For the last time, I bid goodbye to my house. I knew I would miss this house. I would miss everything. We were about to leave when our neighbors old Mr. and Mrs. Pierce came and asked:
“Going somewhere?”
“Nothing special, just kids were insisting for trip, so-you know…” Mom said faking a smile.
They smiled and left gracelessly.
We sat in the solar-car. The car started. A new chapter in my life had begun.
“The biggest problem is the people of earth look like us so it is hard to differentiate them.” Naomi said after a long stillness.
“I know. Once we reach there we should stay together no matter what happens.” Evan said.
“No matter what!” Ira repeated.
“Wh...what’s gonna happen now?” I asked Naomi, as I hugged her.
“Nothing’…I mean there is a war going...” She said hugging me tightly.
“A WAR!” I asked clutching her hand.
“Don’t worry we’re gonna stay together!” she said calmly. Her voice was very soothing and satisfying, I don’t know why but when she said this, felt very sure, as if the war would really stop.
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TheUnknownAnonymous said...
Nov. 16, 2012 at 5:43 am:
LOVED YOUR STORY!!!  THE ENDIND WAS JUST EPIC!! :)
 
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mikey123 said...
Oct. 15, 2012 at 3:56 am:
I LIKED THE STORY BUT I THINK THE CLIMAX MADE THE BOOK WORTH READING!!! <3
 
Vagabond replied...
Oct. 15, 2012 at 4:04 am :
really very Glad to know you like it! thanks!
 
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a new era? nice name said...
Oct. 15, 2012 at 3:54 am:
i liked the book but it could've been better... "If there's a book that you want to read, but it hasn't been written yet, then you must write it." --Toni Morrison
 
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Oct. 15, 2012 at 4:04 am :
really very Glad to know you like it! thanks!
 
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imagine.a.world. said...
Oct. 14, 2012 at 3:35 am:
AWEOSOME AND I LOVED IT
 
Vagabond replied...
Oct. 14, 2012 at 3:36 am :
Thanks a lot i really appreciate it!
 
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LOVERR said...
Oct. 14, 2012 at 3:26 am:
HEEY! this is the first thing i ever read and i LOVE IT!!
 
Vagabond replied...
Oct. 14, 2012 at 3:37 am :
Thanks a lot i really appreciate it!
 
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CrAzYaNn said...
Oct. 12, 2012 at 2:36 pm:
I think you are so unique:) I really like your ideas and I would love to know how you were able to come up with this !!!
 
Vagabond replied...
Oct. 13, 2012 at 3:47 am :
i am really very happy you liked it...
:) BTW the idea just came... :)
 
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Born2Love97 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 19, 2012 at 3:54 pm:
VERY good! I absolutely loved it! Happy writing!
 
Vagabond replied...
Sept. 20, 2012 at 5:55 am :
Glad to know that you liked it!! :D Thanks for your feedback!! :D :D
 
I agree Born2love97 replied...
Oct. 15, 2012 at 3:58 am :
i have been reading many books in teenink and this is a really nice story! :)
 
Vagabond replied...
Oct. 15, 2012 at 4:06 am :
really very Glad to know you like it! thanks!
 
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Writer Y. said...
Sept. 15, 2012 at 7:56 am:
loved the quotes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
Vagabond replied...
Sept. 15, 2012 at 8:02 am :
Thanks! really glad you liked it
 
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Liar L. said...
Sept. 15, 2012 at 7:46 am:
OMIGOD I LOVEEED IT KWWP WRITING! loll
 
Vagabond replied...
Sept. 15, 2012 at 8:02 am :
Thanks! really glad you liked it
 
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KingMothraThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 9, 2012 at 8:53 am:
Wow...Deep. I just got goosebumps! Very, very well written. I like your combo of modern writing (OMG!!!) and Earth's demise (Darned humans, we WILL kill the Earth, mark my words). Thanks for posting on MCAA, by the way. I look forward to reading more of this! (I haven't quite finished, you see).
 
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