A Cursed Romance

May 28, 2012
By CountryPopGirl PLATINUM, Lawrenceville, New Jersey
CountryPopGirl PLATINUM, Lawrenceville, New Jersey
38 articles 16 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You love someone, you open yourself up to suffering, that's the sad truth. Maybe they'll break your heart, maybe you'll break their heart and never be able to look at yourself in the same way. Those are the risks. The thought of losing so much control over personal happiness is unbearable. That's the burden. Like wings, they have weight, we feel that weight on our backs, but they are a burden that lifts us. Burdens which allow us to fly..."
-Dr. Jack Hodgins (Bones)


Summary:

This is a romance novel filled that is season with action/adventure. It is about how far Gavin will go for the person he loves, and what it will cost him.


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A Cursed Romance


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on Feb. 24 2013 at 10:46 am
CountryPopGirl PLATINUM, Lawrenceville, New Jersey
38 articles 16 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You love someone, you open yourself up to suffering, that's the sad truth. Maybe they'll break your heart, maybe you'll break their heart and never be able to look at yourself in the same way. Those are the risks. The thought of losing so much control over personal happiness is unbearable. That's the burden. Like wings, they have weight, we feel that weight on our backs, but they are a burden that lifts us. Burdens which allow us to fly..."
-Dr. Jack Hodgins (Bones)

I'll admit, this is one of my worst stories, if you check out some of my more recent stuff, or on wattpad .com / LuverofSupernatural there is some better stuff.

on Feb. 23 2013 at 8:17 pm
Ms.PeytonLovesHP GOLD, Rancho Cordova, California
18 articles 0 photos 184 comments

Favorite Quote:
“We are all a little weird and life is a little weird, and when we find someone whose weirdness is compatible with ours, we join up with them and fall in mutual weirdness and call it love.” - Doctor Seuss

Ummmm........ Okay, so there were definetly good things in this, but there were bad things too. I liiked the plot and such, but on the bad side: the story was too short, the background information wasn't given nearly detailed enough, the chapters too short, and somewhat mediokre text. Overall, it was a very rough cut, but even the roughest, ugliest rock can be polished into a precious gem!

on Jun. 5 2012 at 6:08 am
CountryPopGirl PLATINUM, Lawrenceville, New Jersey
38 articles 16 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You love someone, you open yourself up to suffering, that's the sad truth. Maybe they'll break your heart, maybe you'll break their heart and never be able to look at yourself in the same way. Those are the risks. The thought of losing so much control over personal happiness is unbearable. That's the burden. Like wings, they have weight, we feel that weight on our backs, but they are a burden that lifts us. Burdens which allow us to fly..."
-Dr. Jack Hodgins (Bones)

sorry You can't see the link for my Jess and Gavin "actors". :'(

Just type in Courtney Visser and Nick Russo into Google Image search. It should be the first picture


on Jun. 5 2012 at 6:03 am
CountryPopGirl PLATINUM, Lawrenceville, New Jersey
38 articles 16 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You love someone, you open yourself up to suffering, that's the sad truth. Maybe they'll break your heart, maybe you'll break their heart and never be able to look at yourself in the same way. Those are the risks. The thought of losing so much control over personal happiness is unbearable. That's the burden. Like wings, they have weight, we feel that weight on our backs, but they are a burden that lifts us. Burdens which allow us to fly..."
-Dr. Jack Hodgins (Bones)

Thanks for your comment! ;P

To be honest, I just wanted there love to just start with a kiss. In my mind, they never even talked to each other until they met at the bar. So, their love started just at their moment.

I do agree with you I am very rushed when I write stories, but that may be because I watch too many shows with fast plot lines. (I like trying to give people a mental movie.)

The attack, I tried to make it seem like he was going to ra.pe her, but maybe it didn't seem like that.

Also, I plan on making a sequel. I hope to be able to bring Jess back to life or have Gavin and Jess keep their love alive.      Anyway, thanks for the comment!


on Jun. 5 2012 at 1:59 am
nemish23 BRONZE, Sydney, Other
2 articles 0 photos 110 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The happiest people don't necessarily have the best of everything;
They just make the most of everything they have."

"Today is life. The only life we're sure of. Make the most of today." -CSI:NY

Short and sweet is a great way to describe your story!

However, I think the story itself was rushed a little. You could have expanded the beginning a bit to show how their love grew and how how this started. The attack itself, seemed a little unprovoked and not very rational. Maybe add some reasoning behind it (the attack).

But I love the ending, it adds a new twist. Maybe you could write a sequel about whatever Jess has become.

I loved this story on the whole. I wish it was a little longer, but the characters were really great and really creative.

Great job!

<3





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