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Author's note: Based on a true story.
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First Love

A first glance,
A first sight,

A first spark,
A first light.

A first tug,
A first feeling,

A first pull,
A first reeling.

A first want,
A first need,

A first start,
A first seed.

A first story,
A first tale,

A first heartbreak,
A first fail.

A first memory
A first thought,

Maybe it’s happy,
Maybe it’s not.

My heart soars, flying above,
I will never forget my first love.
Chapters:   « Previous 1 ... 9 10 11


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FallenAngel170198This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 9, 2013 at 9:29 am
This is awesome. I think that the ending kind of like just stopped when a good bit came in but apart from that it was good :D can you please go check out some of my stuff? Thank you :D
 
team_haymitchThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 4, 2012 at 1:42 pm
emily was in 5th grade! she was little. she shouldn't have been dating, and she knew it.
 
Zuccini75 said...
Apr. 3, 2012 at 2:52 pm
Oh - Good, rather abrupt ending but good job!  I just don't get why she doesn't tell the guy yes?!!?!? , it happpened to me once - I told they guy he was a moron, but went with him anyway! :)
 
nemish23 said...
Mar. 29, 2012 at 5:18 pm

awesome!!! keep going, i really like it.

and check out my work too? :)

 
Zuccini75 replied...
Apr. 3, 2012 at 2:53 pm
I saw yours, the coloured eyes one - that was really well written too!
 
Mrs.NiallHoran said...
Mar. 28, 2012 at 10:52 am
OMG emily ur work just keeps getting better and better. I would rate it 5 stars, but i can't soo, know in ur heart that i love it. 
 

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