True Love

February 6, 2012
By arichman40 PLATINUM, Basalt, Colorado
arichman40 PLATINUM, Basalt, Colorado
44 articles 0 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never judge a book by its cover"


Summary:

Ana is a junior in high school who has been involved in phone communication with a "mystery guy" since Fifth grade.
When he asks her to the annual Valentines Day Dance, she is overjoyed and can't wait to meet him. But when her best sees her, he is in awe.
At the dance, not so thrilled with the way things panned out with her "mystery lover", she turns to Ben in search for comfort. Knowing that this might be his only chance to win her over, Ben and Ana fight through all the odds to fall in love.


Alyssa R.

True Love


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on May. 21 2012 at 5:36 pm
arichman40 PLATINUM, Basalt, Colorado
44 articles 0 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never judge a book by its cover"

thank you for you feed back

on May. 21 2012 at 2:04 am
nemish23 BRONZE, Sydney, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"The happiest people don't necessarily have the best of everything;
They just make the most of everything they have."

"Today is life. The only life we're sure of. Make the most of today." -CSI:NY

It was a good story, don't get me wrong but I am a strong believer in writing about new and original ideas.

You could always write it as a fan fiction so don't lose heart!

<3


on May. 19 2012 at 12:55 pm
arichman40 PLATINUM, Basalt, Colorado
44 articles 0 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never judge a book by its cover"

I know, I based it off of that movie. It maybe wasn't the best idea, but I thought I wrote a good story

on May. 19 2012 at 4:47 am
nemish23 BRONZE, Sydney, Other
2 articles 0 photos 110 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The happiest people don't necessarily have the best of everything;
They just make the most of everything they have."

"Today is life. The only life we're sure of. Make the most of today." -CSI:NY

This was a pretty cool story, i loved it a little more than your other ones.

The only downfall was, i'm not sure if you've watched it, but the movie "A Cinderella Story" with Hilary Duff, begins the same way with her texting a guy and meeting the true him at a dance. It was the same right down to the name "Austin Ames". Only the ending was different.

Don't get me wrong, I loved that movie, but I believe that if you want to make a work of writing truly your own, you need to avoid that.

Be careful for next time, but apart from that, I loved it! The characters and the story were brilliant and I loved the bit about playing with Barbies. LOL!

<3


on Feb. 13 2012 at 10:13 am
arichman40 PLATINUM, Basalt, Colorado
44 articles 0 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never judge a book by its cover"

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed my book. I will keep posting and will remember to read your postings as well! :)

on Feb. 13 2012 at 9:43 am
Mermaidmissy SILVER, Las Vegas, Nevada
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Ok, your book is so good it had me at I just so love it very much. Can you please write some more pages soon. And can you please look at some of my stuff to please and my book as well. Thanks! :)


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