Wow! pretty good! I checked out the songs! LOVE day to remember. Here are some songs to check out!
You Stupid Girl, by Framing Hanley, All Around me, by Flyleaf, Built to Fall, by Trivithum (I think its spelling is close!) You Are So Beautiful, by Escape The Fate, All I want, by A Day to Remember, and Bring me to lkife, by evanescance. They are all good songs!
write more! it's going awesome!
i love your characters- they have a lot of potential.
and check out some of my stuff too? :)