In His Eyes

January 8, 2012
By Writer1 BRONZE, Las Vegas, Nevada
Writer1 BRONZE, Las Vegas, Nevada
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Favorite Quote:
"Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect. It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfections." -Unknown


Summary:

Alaina is heart broken after her father's affair drives her family apart. Alone and loveless she feels as if she is falling apart. But then she meets Justin. Dark, mysterious Justin who helps Alaina to believe in love again. Everything seems to finally be coming together again until she finds out that Justin has a secret. A secret that may not only take their love, but their lives.


Claire S.

In His Eyes


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on Mar. 31 2012 at 4:05 am
nemish23 BRONZE, Sydney, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"The happiest people don't necessarily have the best of everything;
They just make the most of everything they have."

"Today is life. The only life we're sure of. Make the most of today." -CSI:NY

great plot line. if you wanted, you could even take the idea and stretch it out into a full length novel.

also, i know when there are twins in the story you want to give them similar names, but just make sure to don't mix them up.

but great story! i loved every minute of it! :)


Ky. Oma said...
on Jan. 15 2012 at 6:37 pm
Very well written story...I was captivated.




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