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Steven

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For Now

I'm a realistic person. I know that things won't last. I know that things will change and shift.
Steven wouldn't be here forever.
So I decided to just be happy that he was here now.
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C.L.Erins said...
Jan. 2, 2012 at 9:26 pm:
i like how she was brave enough to stick around after Sarah showed up I would have bolted when she stared crying nicely done :)
 
DallysGrrl replied...
Apr. 21, 2012 at 5:49 pm :
Thanks so much!
 
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IT_WILL_RAIN said...
Jan. 1, 2012 at 4:13 pm:
i like how he couldnt decide, that was kind of jerkish but i liked how it turned out.
 
DallysGrrl replied...
Apr. 21, 2012 at 5:48 pm :
Thank you!
 
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writerchik_123 said...
Nov. 30, 2011 at 11:42 pm:
More!!!!!!! Please more!!!!!
 
DallysGrrl replied...
Apr. 21, 2012 at 5:45 pm :
I'm adding more soon. I know it took a long time, but I'm finally catching up on all of my teen ink stuff.
 
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BrownEyedGirl said...
Oct. 28, 2011 at 7:35 pm:

It was very good!  I enjoyed it!  I think it could have used a bit more detail, but it was simple enough that I loved it!  Hope you write more soon!

 

 
DallysGrrl replied...
Apr. 21, 2012 at 5:47 pm :
Thanks! I appreciate the criticism and will definitely take it into account as I finally begin to edit it :)
 
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Bookworm1998 said...
Oct. 27, 2011 at 5:10 pm:
at first, i thought it was a total cliche how it was gonna work out, but then it totally twisted and i loved that! good on you for a surprise climatic point. :)
 
DallysGrrl replied...
Apr. 21, 2012 at 5:43 pm :
Thanks! I appreciate and was glad that it wasn't too expected.
 
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DallysGrrl said...
Sept. 10, 2011 at 12:50 pm:
Thanks so much. And no, but I did kind of have a dream about it so I embelished it because I liked its concept. Thanks again. :)
 
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Thandiwe said...
Sept. 8, 2011 at 2:47 pm:
GREAT!!:). is this based on a true story?
 
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LilLover5-15 said...
Sept. 1, 2011 at 7:32 pm:

Love ittttt

 

 
DallysGrrl replied...
Sept. 3, 2011 at 11:32 am :
Thanks glad you liked it so much!!
 
Esperanza replied...
Sept. 8, 2012 at 7:51 pm :
oh my gosh this is sooooooo good it's like ur painting a picture in my head and that's the sign of a really good writer!!!!
 
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