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HomeSteven
For Now
I'm a realistic person. I know that things won't last. I know that things will change and shift.Steven wouldn't be here forever.
So I decided to just be happy that he was here now.
C.L.Erinsi like how she was brave enough to stick around after Sarah showed up I would have bolted when she stared crying nicely done :)
IT_WILL_RAINi like how he couldnt decide, that was kind of jerkish but i liked how it turned out.
writerchik_123More!!!!!!! Please more!!!!!
I'm adding more soon. I know it took a long time, but I'm finally catching up on all of my teen ink stuff.
BrownEyedGirl
It was very good! I enjoyed it! I think it could have used a bit more detail, but it was simple enough that I loved it! Hope you write more soon!
Thanks! I appreciate the criticism and will definitely take it into account as I finally begin to edit it :)
Bookworm1998at first, i thought it was a total cliche how it was gonna work out, but then it totally twisted and i loved that! good on you for a surprise climatic point. :)
Thanks! I appreciate and was glad that it wasn't too expected.
Thanks so much. And no, but I did kind of have a dream about it so I embelished it because I liked its concept. Thanks again. :)
Thandiwe
LilLover5-15Love ittttt
Esperanzaoh my gosh this is sooooooo good it's like ur painting a picture in my head and that's the sign of a really good writer!!!!
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