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That Summer
Summary:
Everything in life has been plain and boring for high-school junior Jess Hinshaw. Nothing to special has ever happened to her or in her life. Then one day she meets the handsome stranger in the record store named Gabe.
She and Gabe start off as just talking about every kinds of music there is. They talk about there favorites and all the kinds they hate. Jess starts to understand that maybe they could be more.
Once Jess and Gabe starts getting closer to Gabe she senses something is off about him. He doesn't seem the same as everyone. She rarely See's him in the day. Never See's him eat. She starts to wonder what is he...?
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That Summer
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Well, I'm sorry I gave you an honest critique. In your thread, you asked for people's opinions and I gave you mine. As it stands, you still need to give me feedback on three more of my pieces.
I realize you may not have much time to go over your work, but why submit something if you know it's not your best? Editing is hard, yes, but it is also necessary.
"Maybe my book isn't for you if you find so much distaste in it."
Well, I don't particularly like romances. But I read it anyway because you asked for a critique and I gave you my objective opinion. A lot of the things I critique I wouldn't read unless someone asked me, but I still do it. Why? Because I want feedback on my work and I realize people who read my work in return for feedback probably wouldn't read it unless I aksed them to. That's life.
I still stand by everything I said in my original critique. Confronting me will not change my opinions.
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