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Matchmaker's Mansion

Author's note: Hope you enjoy! If you want to read the next chapter just post me a comment and I will. ^_^
Author's note: Hope you enjoy! If you want to read the next chapter just post me a comment and I will. ^_^  « Hide author's note
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Matchmaker's Mansion: Ch. 1

The sign swung back and forth in the chill wind with a squeaking noise like it hadn’t been oiled for years. Once it had slowed to a gentle back and forth motion, she read the faded gold letters on the wood background.

MATCHMAKER’S MANSION- the elegant letters spelled out on the sign. Hesitantly, she looked to the door that it hung over.

Perhaps this wasn’t a good idea. Asha shuffled in place, glancing at the door again. Yes, I am mad at my ex-boyfriend but is that reason enough to enter the creepy-looking place? The windows were covered with dust so that she couldn’t see through and the mint-colored paint was peeling off the front door in long strips.
NO! I have to prove him wrong- prove to him that I am capable of reeling in someone other than him. I don’t need him anymore, and I can find someone 500 times better.
With her courage boosted by her self-lecture, she strode over to the door and turned the door handle. She expected a huge creak like the sign over the door, but instead the door didn’t make a sound. It opened easily into a room dimly lit by a myriad of small candles strategically placed so that the entire room glowed. The scent of roses tickled her nose, the room perfectly warm compared to the biting cold of outside.

As she unwound her scarf from around her neck to let herself breathe better, she spotted a white velvet chair sitting before a desk. At the desk sat a man in an extravagant red wine suit that looked like it belonged in the Victorian era along with the white chair.

“Come right in, miss, wouldn’t want you to catch cold on this blustery morning,” he said in a pleasant tone, but all she could think was- Who talks like that nowadays? –and- I like his accent.

The door was already closed, so she took a few steps forward. He motioned her to come closer with a waving hand and she obeyed. She lowered her thawed-out self into the white chair, feeling like she was dirtying it by sitting on it.

“Well, since this is the Matchmaker’s Mansion, I can presume what you are here for. You’ve come for a match…correct me if I’m wrong,” he leaned forward on his elbows. The candlelight bounced off of his gelled hair, making it extremely shiny.

“You are 100% correct, sir,” she smiled despite the fact that her heart was shivering with uneasiness.

“Right then, I suppose you’d like to fill out a form then. Here are the papers,” he dropped a stack of papers in front of her on the desk that made her mouth gape wide open. “Once you’re done— ring the bell. Our master matchmakers will go through every one of your answers and I will notify you in letter form when we have found the choice few that will most likely be your match. From there the fun begins.” He rubbed his hands together. “Now if you’ll excuse me,” he rose from his chair and before a single word could escape her mouth—he was gone.

She looked down at the stack of papers, having the sick feeling that a schoolgirl gets looking at her homework. Might as well get started. She pulled a feather pen from the marble cup on the desk and read the first line:

Would you be willing to die for the person you loved?
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DirectingGabs said...
Jan. 14, 2012 at 3:14 pm
I love it! My computer won't let me read chapter 20 though... It's making me extremely sad. But, good job so far!
DirectingGabs replied...
Jan. 14, 2012 at 3:22 pm
Nevermind! Hehe, I fixed it. I love chapter 20 now! Right more please!:D
LillyDenshawe said...
Jan. 11, 2012 at 11:32 am
OMG! It's so good! I want more! I'm rooting for Chase and Shay and hoping that Ever knocks some sense into one of them...
Hope_Princess replied...
Jan. 11, 2012 at 8:39 pm
Aww! You're so sweet. You even said that my book was one of your favorites. I feel more than honored. I'm onto the new chapter as I speak. I hope it'll be up soon. :-) Thanks again!
C.L.Erins said...
Jan. 10, 2012 at 3:58 pm
love it!!!! keep going!! more soon please!! i am so addicted to these guys!! :)
Erinnn said...
Jan. 10, 2012 at 2:42 pm
i like the new parts! please post more soon!
EM&M said...
Jan. 9, 2012 at 7:22 pm
MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRREEEEEEE please you are killing me!!!!!!!!
lillybud7 said...
Jan. 8, 2012 at 6:49 pm
very interesting and funny cant wait for whats next : )
IMme2 said...
Jan. 2, 2012 at 6:01 pm
please please WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!
EllieHeart said...
Jan. 1, 2012 at 2:26 pm
Love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please Finish... the suspense is killing me...
SilverSun said...
Dec. 27, 2011 at 10:26 am
I think its a beautiful story, I can't wait to read more!!!!!!!!!!!!! It must be hard to pick who Asha's gonna choose!! Kinda Hope its Shay, somehow.... Anyways your story not mine, KEEP WRITING!!
Erinnn said...
Dec. 22, 2011 at 3:05 pm
finish it!!!
Jeera said...
Dec. 12, 2011 at 3:42 pm
Oh my gosh. I want to know what happens next! 
wannabeauthor96 said...
Dec. 3, 2011 at 2:09 pm
I need more!! Like right now!! I love it!! I love Asha, Shay, Ever, and Chase!! Espically Chase!!! If Asha doesn't want him I will take him: )  It's so good!! Post more soon!!: )
SpringMoon98 said...
Dec. 2, 2011 at 11:12 pm
This is so good can't wait for more chapters!
unicorn poop said...
Nov. 30, 2011 at 1:35 pm
C.L.Erins said...
Nov. 29, 2011 at 4:14 pm
Keep writing please!!!! this story is amazing!!! :D
IMloved said...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 1:35 pm
you need to write more pretty please im begging you!!! im sooooo hooked!
springdance said...
Nov. 27, 2011 at 5:48 pm
Hey Melissa! I love it!I just read all the recent chapters and decided you need to write more. :) Hope you're not overloaded with homework! -Sarah
Hope_Princess replied...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 6:15 pm

Hey! Thanks so much for taking the time to read it!

And trust me- I AM overloaded with homework/projects plus work and basketball practice.

I'll try my best to write more and contact you. :-)


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