Facebook Activity



Teen Ink on Twitter

Teen Ink
teenink

TeenInk How would you rearrange this old cliche? "You can catch more flies with honey than with vinegar" http://t.co/xTNZxcKYxK

Fri May 24, 2013 10:17am  Reply  Retweet  Favorite

TeenInk "Thinking is the best way to travel." - The Moody Blues http://t.co/5jzE5kVJyB

Thu May 23, 2013 10:55am  Reply  Retweet  Favorite

TeenInk If this is the ending of the story, what is the beginning? http://t.co/gRzPosYXRi

Wed May 22, 2013 8:48am  Reply  Retweet  Favorite

Follow Teen Ink on Twitter »

Report abuse Submit my work Share/bookmark Email Print Home

Matchmaker's Mansion

Rate this article:
Author's note: Hope you enjoy! If you want to read the next chapter just post me a comment and I will. ^_^
Author's note: Hope you enjoy! If you want to read the next chapter just post me a comment and I will. ^_^  « Hide author's note
Chapters:   « Previous 1 2 3 4 5 6 ... 26 Next »

Matchmaker's Mansion: Ch. 1

The sign swung back and forth in the chill wind with a squeaking noise like it hadn’t been oiled for years. Once it had slowed to a gentle back and forth motion, she read the faded gold letters on the wood background.

MATCHMAKER’S MANSION- the elegant letters spelled out on the sign. Hesitantly, she looked to the door that it hung over.

Perhaps this wasn’t a good idea. Asha shuffled in place, glancing at the door again. Yes, I am mad at my ex-boyfriend but is that reason enough to enter the creepy-looking place? The windows were covered with dust so that she couldn’t see through and the mint-colored paint was peeling off the front door in long strips.
NO! I have to prove him wrong- prove to him that I am capable of reeling in someone other than him. I don’t need him anymore, and I can find someone 500 times better.
With her courage boosted by her self-lecture, she strode over to the door and turned the door handle. She expected a huge creak like the sign over the door, but instead the door didn’t make a sound. It opened easily into a room dimly lit by a myriad of small candles strategically placed so that the entire room glowed. The scent of roses tickled her nose, the room perfectly warm compared to the biting cold of outside.

As she unwound her scarf from around her neck to let herself breathe better, she spotted a white velvet chair sitting before a desk. At the desk sat a man in an extravagant red wine suit that looked like it belonged in the Victorian era along with the white chair.

“Come right in, miss, wouldn’t want you to catch cold on this blustery morning,” he said in a pleasant tone, but all she could think was- Who talks like that nowadays? –and- I like his accent.

The door was already closed, so she took a few steps forward. He motioned her to come closer with a waving hand and she obeyed. She lowered her thawed-out self into the white chair, feeling like she was dirtying it by sitting on it.

“Well, since this is the Matchmaker’s Mansion, I can presume what you are here for. You’ve come for a match…correct me if I’m wrong,” he leaned forward on his elbows. The candlelight bounced off of his gelled hair, making it extremely shiny.

“You are 100% correct, sir,” she smiled despite the fact that her heart was shivering with uneasiness.

“Right then, I suppose you’d like to fill out a form then. Here are the papers,” he dropped a stack of papers in front of her on the desk that made her mouth gape wide open. “Once you’re done— ring the bell. Our master matchmakers will go through every one of your answers and I will notify you in letter form when we have found the choice few that will most likely be your match. From there the fun begins.” He rubbed his hands together. “Now if you’ll excuse me,” he rose from his chair and before a single word could escape her mouth—he was gone.

She looked down at the stack of papers, having the sick feeling that a schoolgirl gets looking at her homework. Might as well get started. She pulled a feather pen from the marble cup on the desk and read the first line:

Would you be willing to die for the person you loved?
Chapters:   « Previous 1 2 3 4 5 6 ... 26 Next »


Join the Discussion


This book has 239 comments. Post your own!

IMperfect said...
Oct. 3, 2011 at 12:28 pm:
OMG YOU NEEEEED TO WRITE MORE!!!!
 
Hope_PrincessThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 24, 2011 at 9:26 pm :
If you would like to keep reading my story- I've put more up. I hope you like it!
 
Reply to this comment Post a new comment
 
livethelifeyouwanttolive said...
Sept. 23, 2011 at 6:40 pm:
You are an AMAZING writer. I forgot this was written by another teen. I am LOVING this book. It's amazing. <333
 
Hope_PrincessThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Sept. 24, 2011 at 4:39 pm :

LOL! Thanks so much- it's fun to hear the same thing from two different people. It kind of cements things.

And thank you so much for loving my book- it makes me feel appreciated!

p.s.- I love your username.

 
livethelifeyouwanttolive replied...
Sept. 26, 2011 at 2:46 pm :

Oh it's no problem at all. :D

p.s. Thanks! <333

 
Reply to this comment Post a new comment
 
Basketball.Queen said...
Sept. 19, 2011 at 12:45 pm:
Please write more. You can't leave us hanging with that last chapter! Please think bout writing more. You are such a talented and gifted author.
 
Reply to this comment Post a new comment
 
CresentShadowThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 14, 2011 at 3:20 pm:
Great job, you need to put more up! :D Its amazing still.
 
Reply to this comment Post a new comment
 
Randomize14 said...
Sept. 8, 2011 at 8:48 pm:
omg i love this!!!!!! KEEP WRITING PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
Reply to this comment Post a new comment
 
animalluvr4evr said...
Aug. 30, 2011 at 11:54 am:
You are a really good writer!  Way better than I could ever be!  Your book has me hooked! I crave for more! :)
 
Hope_PrincessThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Sept. 2, 2011 at 7:05 pm :

*blushes* Thanks so very much!

And don't say that: you can be so much better than me. Just keep working at it.

I'm so happy I've got you hooked- it makes me feel so accomplished. Your craving is soon to be satisfied. :-)

 
Reply to this comment Post a new comment
 
CresentShadowThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 28, 2011 at 6:02 pm:
I need more! (: That should become a movie if you ever finish it.
 
Hope_PrincessThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Sept. 2, 2011 at 7:04 pm :

Aww! Thanks so much- I feel so honored.

Someday....maybe it'll happen. And I hope you'll see it. :-D

 
CresentShadowThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Sept. 3, 2011 at 8:01 am :
No problem (: I really would like more. 
 
Hope_PrincessThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Sept. 8, 2011 at 5:13 pm :
More is up! I hope you like it!!
 
Reply to this comment Post a new comment
 
Country_Storm_Inspired said...
Aug. 8, 2011 at 5:32 pm:
Write more!!!! Please(:(:(:
 
Hope_PrincessThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Sept. 2, 2011 at 7:03 pm :

My drive for writing has kind of fizzled out in the past weeks....

My work/school is taking so much of my time: but I'll try hard to write more!

Thanks for your comment!

 
Reply to this comment Post a new comment
 
writerfreak21231This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 8, 2011 at 11:21 am:
 I love romances and this was really good!! I very nice piece of work! great job! I just posted a new story i wrote called: Alien invasion series book one: the caller. If any of u had time please go check it out and post feedback and comments. It would be much appreciated! Thanks! and keep writing everyone! :)(:
 
Reply to this comment Post a new comment
 
FallenAngel1 said...
Jun. 22, 2011 at 5:04 pm:
WHat happened to Chase? Is he alright? Hope that he will get better. Why does Shay dislike Asha, will he be the one that she chooses? What did he mean when he said, ' you have yet to inderstand how love can hurt a person.' Please write more!!??
 
Hope_PrincessThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jun. 23, 2011 at 8:20 am :

So many questions...and I have all the answers to them. But I obviously can't tell you,  because it would completely spoil it!

So....I guess I'll just have to wait and let you read the upcoming chapters when they get posted. ^_^ I know, I'm so mean to do that.

Patience, FallenAngel1 (my awesome number one fan!) and everything will come clear. ^_^

Thanks for reading!

 
FallenAngel1 replied...
Jun. 24, 2011 at 6:34 pm :
Your welcome and i am your #1 FAN!!! I will be waiting patiently for more. Keep me posted. :-)
 
Hope_PrincessThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jul. 10, 2011 at 3:36 pm :
GUESS WHAT! More is up. ^_^ I hope you like it. Thanks for all your support.
 
Reply to this comment Post a new comment
 

Launch Teen Ink Chat
Site Feedback