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May 21, 2011
By FallenAngel1 SILVER, Chula Vista, California
FallenAngel1 SILVER, Chula Vista, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Good Night, good night! Parting is such sweet sorrow, that i shall say good night till it be morrow."-Romeo and Juliet act II scene II, William Shakespeare
"What's In a name? That which we call a rosse by any other name would smell as sweet."-Romeo


Summary:

She is a senior in high school, her mother sends her off to London. Both of her aunts care about her but one doesn't show it. She meets a boy, William knight, and she feels as if she has met him before, his brother makes her feel scared and she doesn't trust him. William is actually a god that has been in love with her for over two millennia and his brother, Hector, is a hybrid of two of the scariest creatures of the night ever invented. Will she be able to be with William but escape Hector's wrath?


Alejandra V.

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tealbird said...
on Jul. 26 2011 at 5:05 pm
If you click on my profile, it should be titled, 'Scarred'. I appreciate that you're taking the time to look. Thanks!!!

on Jul. 25 2011 at 8:40 pm
FallenAngel1 SILVER, Chula Vista, California
9 articles 0 photos 68 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Good Night, good night! Parting is such sweet sorrow, that i shall say good night till it be morrow."-Romeo and Juliet act II scene II, William Shakespeare
"What's In a name? That which we call a rosse by any other name would smell as sweet."-Romeo

thank you for the comment. I have tries to find your book but i can't. Oh and i didn't want to use contraction when William talks, but thank you for being honest, i appreciate it and will try again to find your book. 

tealbird said...
on Jul. 23 2011 at 8:14 pm
I'm so sad to say that I could only manage to find time to read part of the first chapter (so sorry) but what I've read has really, really great potential!! What I was able to see was that some of the descriptive paragraphs required a little more description to make the image stand out clearer in the mind. Oh, and I once read this thing about how to make your dialogue seem more natural between two people-use as many contractions as possible, and imagine how the conversation would go between two people before you write it down. Make no mistake, I was impressed and thought the idea sounded really good. I will be back to read more!!!

MeIsMe18 said...
on Jun. 7 2011 at 7:12 pm
MeIsMe18, Roswell, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
When one door of happiness closes, another opens; But often we look so long at the closed door that we do not see the one that has been opened for us.

Oh...My...God! Loved it was freaking amazing your really good at writing :) Please let me know when you make more books


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