The Snowcone Girl's Story

May 9, 2011
By llamachick PLATINUM, seneca, South Carolina
llamachick PLATINUM, Seneca, South Carolina
42 articles 3 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
I'm selfish, impatient and a little insecure. I make mistakes, I am out of control and at times hard to handle. But if you can't handle me at my worst, then you sure as hell don't deserve me at my best."
— Marilyn Monroe


Summary:

Haley is a young woman who is flash backing to when she was a young teen and had the experience of a lifetime, first love. But don't think this is your average love story, Haley is blunt and tells you the truth. But Will isn't the only guy in her life and you get all the details. This story will be sure to leave you with every emotion imaginable, and you will only want to know more.


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The Snowcone Girl's Story


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on Apr. 4 2012 at 10:36 am
Zuccini75 BRONZE, Chantilly, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"It is better to keep your mouth shut and let people wonder, than telling them yourself."
-Myself

It was a very touching story- but I felt that you killed Will too quickly, like in 2 sentences, and let Haley tell her future in another 2 - that part could have been more descriptive - other than that, Good Job1

E-M13477 said...
on May. 13 2011 at 7:05 am

That is so happy in the begining, and so sad at the end! Every life has some grief, right? Well, that was an amazing story.  

APPLAUSE!!!!!


on May. 11 2011 at 5:10 pm
twizzlerluva97 GOLD, New York City, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Success comes to those who persist after all have given up. Which is why it is never crowded along the extra mile."

that was so beautiful i have been crying for like an hour u r so good but god i wish there was more. Brava!


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