Unforgetable Love

April 21, 2011
By meaghantt BRONZE, Raywood, Texas
meaghantt BRONZE, Raywood, Texas
2 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I can do all things through Christ who strengthens me" Phillippians 4:13


Summary:

New guy? When Meaghan realizes there is a new guy at her school she is eager to know what he looks like and what he's like but what she doesn't know is this new guy will change her life!


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Unforgetable Love


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on Jul. 28 2011 at 8:36 pm
meaghantt BRONZE, Raywood, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"I can do all things through Christ who strengthens me" Phillippians 4:13

Thanks! I appreciate it!

on Jul. 28 2011 at 12:59 pm
DirectingGabs GOLD, Texas, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
\"No one can make you feel inferior without your consent.\"

It was very good!:) But the only thing that bothered me was there was no dialogue and everything went by really fast. But, I'm just one of those people who like dialogue. Good job though!(:

on Apr. 25 2011 at 6:17 am
meaghantt BRONZE, Raywood, Texas
2 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I can do all things through Christ who strengthens me" Phillippians 4:13

thanks i appreciate the comment and i will whenever i get the chance but the second line was like the definiton of love thats what it was meant to be like :))

PJD17 SILVER said...
on Apr. 24 2011 at 3:42 pm
PJD17 SILVER, Belleville, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
I do the best imatation of myself- Ben Folds

i havnt read all of it but so far so good  i do have some critisism  the first chapte especially deffintly needs some touching up as far as word choice and sentance structure  for example, the second line doesnt really make perfect sense  " Love is the feeling that people tend to be affectionate with one another"  i think that line deffintly needs some reworking   as well as just a few other parts of the first chapter   other than that though its pretty good   could you please read and comment on the first chapter or two of my novel A Place Called Heaven its on the third page of most discussed




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