God, When Does my Love Story Begin?

March 29, 2011
By Anonymous

Summary:

Elisabeth embraced her high school years, being the best she could be. But at the same time she was a girl living a sheltered life. Now as a freshman in college she faces situations she never would have dreamed of. Heather, Elisabeth's college roommate is an attractive young woman and guys fall at her feet when she walks into the room.

Elisabeth spotted one day a man, she thought she would never see again. She gave God the pen to write her love life not knowing how hard it would turn out to be.


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God, When Does my Love Story Begin?


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on Jul. 20 2014 at 1:11 pm
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

This needs like more!!! It's really good, and I love that she's Christian and that she trusts in God.

on Dec. 19 2011 at 6:32 pm
I think that this needs more!! Keep it up and fulfill the wishes of your readers! Oh, and, I get that Heather seemed much better online. People usually do.

AvidReader said...
on Oct. 15 2011 at 2:52 am

This is a really good start! My only criticism is the inconsistency of the friendship between Heather and Elisabeth. Heather is introduced as someone who Elisabeth instantly got along with, but on the same page you already have Elisabeth express that she is annoyed and hopes she won't have to spend a lot of time with Heather.  This is just my opinion! 

Otherwise, I enjoyed this a lot! 

More please. :)


on Aug. 25 2011 at 8:07 pm
Bookworm1998 GOLD, Brampton, Other
17 articles 2 photos 118 comments

Favorite Quote:
Preserve your memories, keep them well; what you forget, you can never retell.

pretty good so far. i like ur writing style - looking forward to more! :)

on Aug. 25 2011 at 5:36 pm
JustAnotherDay. BRONZE, Andover, Ohio
2 articles 1 photo 130 comments

Favorite Quote:
Stephen Fry - There are many people out there that will tell you that "you can't". What you've got to do is turn around and say, "watch me."

I need more to actually think anything of it, it doesn't have much to it, rather then that, no mistakes and its pretty good! (:

on Apr. 14 2011 at 8:10 pm
Nomi_1234 BRONZE, Little Elm, Texas
2 articles 13 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"In his heart a man plans his course, but the Lord determines his steps."
~Proverbs 16:9~

You should read it! I enjoyed it!! But I do like these kind of stories anyway...haha

on Apr. 12 2011 at 6:32 pm
LittleMidnight PLATINUM, Glendale, Arizona
28 articles 0 photos 63 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is but a book just waiting to be filled, you make your own story

Ive only read the summary but I can tell that its going to be good. I dont usally read books like this but I am tempted to read this one.

on Apr. 6 2011 at 8:16 pm
Nomi_1234 BRONZE, Little Elm, Texas
2 articles 13 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"In his heart a man plans his course, but the Lord determines his steps."
~Proverbs 16:9~

I like this. It may need some work though. Readers readers! What do ya'll think???


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