Friendly Love

March 29, 2011
By Anonymous

Summary:

I this the story of Lyla Brownson and Peter Hayson. They are just like any other small town kids trying to make sence of the world. they are best friends finding out that their love is something more then they thought and what it means to trust and real friendship.


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Friendly Love


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CutieLove said...
on Sep. 20 2012 at 3:36 pm
add another please i was just getting started

on Jul. 9 2012 at 6:55 pm
Cbsiegel BRONZE, Lake Oswego, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
A woman whose smile is open and whose expression is glad has a kind of beauty no matter what she wears.
Anne Roiphe

I think that there were a lot of grammar mistakes but the plot was very good and interesting. I think that this is a good ending.

Mi-Mi-Rulez said...
on Feb. 6 2012 at 11:26 am
Mi-Mi-Rulez, Waukesha, Wisconsin
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Very well written. I liked it very much. However it could be a bit longer.

Bones96 BRONZE said...
on Jan. 9 2012 at 8:34 pm
Bones96 BRONZE, Charlotte, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Life isn't about finding yourself it's about creating yourself-

If you want me to add another chapter of what happens later just let me know thanks for all the views! :)

on Nov. 10 2011 at 11:37 pm
MaryRoseB. BRONZE, San Jose, California
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I think you should focus on your grammar because I'm finding it really difficult to read this and pay attention.  

Bones96 BRONZE said...
on Sep. 28 2011 at 10:24 pm
Bones96 BRONZE, Charlotte, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Life isn't about finding yourself it's about creating yourself-

I was wondering if you could put a link because I can't fine your story. thanks can't wait to read it

Bones96 BRONZE said...
on Sep. 28 2011 at 10:03 pm
Bones96 BRONZE, Charlotte, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Life isn't about finding yourself it's about creating yourself-

Of course! I love History. :)

on Sep. 28 2011 at 8:35 pm
loveshortstuff11, Rush, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"Never meddle in the affairs of dragons, for you are crunchy and good with ketchup."

Glad that I could make your day!!! Do you think that you could maybe read my novel "Beautiful Eyes", or at least what I have done? It's kind of a historical fiction romance thing... :)

Bones96 BRONZE said...
on Sep. 27 2011 at 9:39 pm
Bones96 BRONZE, Charlotte, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Life isn't about finding yourself it's about creating yourself-

Thank you so much this really mad my day possably week haha. :) I am really glad you enjoyed it!

on Sep. 27 2011 at 9:21 pm
loveshortstuff11, Rush, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"Never meddle in the affairs of dragons, for you are crunchy and good with ketchup."

Oh my gosh that was sooo sweet!!!!! I loved it...and postponed my english homework just to read it lol... WOW!!!!

Bones96 BRONZE said...
on Sep. 6 2011 at 12:03 am
Bones96 BRONZE, Charlotte, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Life isn't about finding yourself it's about creating yourself-

Thanks for reading and your commet. I will have to go back and check over my work I thought I had fixed all that. Anyways thanks again like the feedback. 

on Sep. 5 2011 at 6:53 pm
ThePeaceDaisy BRONZE, Albany, New York
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Favorite Quote:
“Laundry is the only thing that should be separated by color.” - Unknown
I will change this every week!

You're missing a lot of puncuation. Lots of it is just a big run-on sentence. It's annoying me, and normally with run-on sentences, I don't know how to read it, so I stop reading it because it makes NO sense.

Bones96 BRONZE said...
on Aug. 12 2011 at 1:13 pm
Bones96 BRONZE, Charlotte, North Carolina
2 articles 0 photos 108 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life isn't about finding yourself it's about creating yourself-

I am atually out of town right now and don't have my writing with me now but I'll try and have it all done by the end of next week but part of it depends on the editers on teenink when they post it. Thanks for reading and I hope you enjoy it! :)

on Aug. 11 2011 at 1:28 pm
MiNdLeSsLuVeRgIrL BRONZE, Kenly, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
If you love something let it go, if it comes back its yours if it doesn't, it never was!

how long does it take for your stuff to be put on the website!

Bones96 BRONZE said...
on Jul. 30 2011 at 1:08 pm
Bones96 BRONZE, Charlotte, North Carolina
2 articles 0 photos 108 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life isn't about finding yourself it's about creating yourself-

to let everyone know i have edited the rest of it but it will not be up for a while.

Bones96 BRONZE said...
on Jul. 24 2011 at 11:00 am
Bones96 BRONZE, Charlotte, North Carolina
2 articles 0 photos 108 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life isn't about finding yourself it's about creating yourself-

Thanks i'll go over it again. Thank you for your commet it made my day hearing it :)

on Jul. 23 2011 at 9:35 pm
SidPusain BRONZE, Kathmandu, Other
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Favorite Quote:
The most skillful flattery is to listen to what the other person has to say without interfering.

hei i think you need to check the grammer(i mean really check the grammer). Apart from that i like the plot and the way the story goes.

Bones96 BRONZE said...
on Jul. 1 2011 at 2:46 pm
Bones96 BRONZE, Charlotte, North Carolina
2 articles 0 photos 108 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life isn't about finding yourself it's about creating yourself-

Please feel free to commet< I love to hear what you think! Thanks for reading :)

Bones96 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 31 2011 at 11:12 pm
Bones96 BRONZE, Charlotte, North Carolina
2 articles 0 photos 108 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life isn't about finding yourself it's about creating yourself-

Just so everyone know's I am going back a spell checking everything it should be done soon :)

Bones96 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 31 2011 at 10:35 pm
Bones96 BRONZE, Charlotte, North Carolina
2 articles 0 photos 108 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life isn't about finding yourself it's about creating yourself-

Okay, Yea I thought my computer fixed them so I'll do it. And Thank you! It made my day :)


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