The Girl Next Door

March 25, 2011
By hannahbbycakes, Brownsburg, Indiana
hannahbbycakes, Brownsburg, Indiana
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When Tony Jacobs is faced with choosing between his popularity status at school and possibly, the love of this life, will he let unfaithful friends influence him to stay with his Barbie-like girlfriend instead of ditching her for the down to earth new girl?


The Girl Next Door

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This book has 45 comments.

B-Rain BRONZE said...
on Dec. 30 2011 at 12:38 am
B-Rain BRONZE, Jacksonville, Florida
3 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
1 Corinthians 13:8
"Love never fails"

This was really really good, your plot is realistic, along with your characters. It is also relatable to some teen situations which makes it even better! I can't wait to read the rest, keep writing!

ChicUNIQUE said...
on Dec. 23 2011 at 12:20 am
ChicUNIQUE, Little Rock, Arkansas
0 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
Stand up, when standing's not easy

i love this. your characters feel real and true. you should definitely keep writing. i'm looking forward to reading it!!!

on Dec. 21 2011 at 10:41 pm
yazigirl BRONZE, Athens, Texas
1 article 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
"people say hell is endless. i say hell is empty and all the demons are here"- one tree hill

i love this story!!! it made me laugh sooo much!!! please keep writing or i will probably bust a vain!!! amazing!!


on Nov. 13 2011 at 7:28 pm
Camarello SILVER, Salt Lake City, Utah
5 articles 1 photo 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
You'll never cross the ocean if you're scared to lose sight of the shore.

i liiiiiiiiike this :)

Jeera SILVER said...
on Nov. 11 2011 at 4:37 pm
Jeera SILVER, Dowelltown, Tennessee
5 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
Stay strong; be real.

you should write some more. I want to know what happens!

on Nov. 8 2011 at 5:05 pm
LifesIllusion BRONZE, Cicero, Indiana
4 articles 0 photos 127 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't let your fears slow you down. Instead, chase them down and beat them."

You better be planning on writing more or we're gonna have a serious problem here! I loved this story soooooooooooooo much! please write more?!?! :) LOL

on Oct. 25 2011 at 5:55 pm
kenzie2014 BRONZE, N/A, Illinois
4 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"But sadly I was born in the era where a 'Good Morning' text is the most romantic gesture ever."

mg you have to keep writing this. i literally screamed when i noticed it was the last chapter. 

on Oct. 18 2011 at 4:59 pm
DEROSSETT BRONZE, Hampton, Virginia
1 article 0 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
“One day your life will flash before your eyes, make sure it’s worth watching.”

“Dream as if you’ll live forever, live as if you’ll die today”

Please please please please please please please please please please write more!!!!!!!!!!

Are you trying to kill me with suspense?????;)

on Sep. 30 2011 at 2:35 pm
JerseyGrl-008 BRONZE, Yuma, Arizona
1 article 0 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Live long and prosper":p

neeed moreeee!!!

on Sep. 11 2011 at 10:49 am
writerthinkerdreamer BRONZE, Narnia, Massachusetts
3 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Just keep swimming," ~Dory, Finding Nemo

I noticed the POV switch too, it got me confused for a bit there....

on Aug. 29 2011 at 10:15 pm
Bookworm1998 GOLD, Brampton, Other
17 articles 2 photos 118 comments

Favorite Quote:
Preserve your memories, keep them well; what you forget, you can never retell.

this is really good! i like the story so far - you should really continue. it'd be better if the chapters were a little longer though, with more detail. other than that and a few grammar errors - perfection!

on Aug. 20 2011 at 6:17 pm
JustAnotherDay. BRONZE, Andover, Ohio
2 articles 1 photo 130 comments

Favorite Quote:
Stephen Fry - There are many people out there that will tell you that "you can't". What you've got to do is turn around and say, "watch me."

I need more! Now! :D

on Aug. 10 2011 at 9:45 am
Country_Storm_Inspired, The Colony, Texas
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Omgggg adds more NOW!!!!(: and I wouldlove your input on my stories(:

on Aug. 9 2011 at 4:59 pm
ahhhh pleasee make more !

on Aug. 8 2011 at 6:08 pm
MiNdLeSsLuVeRgIrL BRONZE, Kenly, North Carolina
4 articles 0 photos 120 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you love something let it go, if it comes back its yours if it doesn't, it never was!

Make More plz

on Aug. 8 2011 at 5:34 pm
MiNdLeSsLuVeRgIrL BRONZE, Kenly, North Carolina
4 articles 0 photos 120 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you love something let it go, if it comes back its yours if it doesn't, it never was!

Ikr i love it

on Jul. 29 2011 at 10:22 pm
just-another-url GOLD, Cannes, Other
16 articles 6 photos 151 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's a good thing to be strange. Normalness leads to sadness." -Philip Lester

pleasepleasepleasepleaseplease write moremoremoremoremore!!!!!!!!!!!

shearbear24 said...
on Jul. 28 2011 at 7:39 pm

shearbear24 said...
on Jul. 27 2011 at 3:02 pm
Omg talk about awesome! :D Haha you'd be my bestie xD I love people who like to write (I love to write) 

on Jun. 15 2011 at 3:53 pm
twizzlerluva97 GOLD, New York City, New York
13 articles 0 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Success comes to those who persist after all have given up. Which is why it is never crowded along the extra mile."



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