The Girl Next Door

March 25, 2011
By hannahbbycakes, Brownsburg, Indiana
hannahbbycakes, Brownsburg, Indiana
0 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Summary:

When Tony Jacobs is faced with choosing between his popularity status at school and possibly, the love of this life, will he let unfaithful friends influence him to stay with his Barbie-like girlfriend instead of ditching her for the down to earth new girl?


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on Sep. 19 2017 at 5:49 pm
Flying4Dreams,
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Finishhhhhh it pleaseeeeeeee!!! xD

bookworm223 said...
on Feb. 8 2014 at 4:46 pm
I know exactly how you feel!!!!! But I've learnt to keep going, and I promise that the results will be great!!! 

on Apr. 4 2013 at 3:59 am
FallenAngel170198 GOLD, Bundaberg, Other
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Umm, More Please? It's brilliant :)

Eniola said...
on Dec. 4 2012 at 8:24 am
Eniola, Okota, Other
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Favorite Quote:
There are three rules for writing a novel:
1.
2.
3.
Unfortunately,no one knows what they are. -W.Somerset Maugham.

Hey...uh,where's the rest of the story?  Girl,if you don't finish it I am going to hunt you down! Just kidding. Your story's amazing :)

The_Cheese said...
on Nov. 30 2012 at 7:53 pm
The_Cheese, Dalton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
Life is not worth living without three things, 1.Chocolate 2.Love and my personal favorite 3.Mistakes.

You are a very good writer. I like your chapters a lot. I only have one concern, please limit your cussing. I know that you star it, but please I can still read the titles and when you use the fword as a title, well its kind of disturbing.

peggy14 said...
on Sep. 13 2012 at 6:34 pm
peggy14, Worcester, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"live life with no regrets"

wwwrrrrrrrrrriiittttttttttteeeeeeeeee moreeeeeeeeeee  plz:)  

ItWillRain said...
on May. 10 2012 at 11:10 am
ItWillRain, Odense NĂ˜, Other
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Hi i'm new here, how can i read the next chapter?? nothing happens when i press "next" :/

on Apr. 18 2012 at 8:20 am
Light_Walker SILVER, Lafayette, Indiana
7 articles 1 photo 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
“There comes a time in our lives when we do things that we don’t understand. We confuse ourselves, we might even logically oppose our impulses and yet we act on them anyway... There are some things that we feel that we absolutely must do. We might know that they are wrong, or pointless, or gravely punishable, and yet we do them anyway. These actions are not born of anger or emotion – we are perfectly sober. It’s rather inexplicable. When the time comes, we can’t stop ourselves and so we cannot blame ourselves.” -Umasi, Truancy

This story is very realistic. It captures just how many teenagers run through their daily lives. The song "Tear Drops on My Guitar" actually reminded me of this story. Great job and I hope you can find the time to write more!

on Apr. 3 2012 at 9:17 pm
cantdeleteaccounthelp, Sey, West Virginia
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I like it pretty much! It is very realistic. I wish you could end it, I don't really like loose ends... :)

on Mar. 15 2012 at 9:48 pm
Ms.PeytonLovesHP GOLD, Rancho Cordova, California
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Favorite Quote:
“We are all a little weird and life is a little weird, and when we find someone whose weirdness is compatible with ours, we join up with them and fall in mutual weirdness and call it love.” - Doctor Seuss

Oh my god! It's REALLY REALLY GOOD! You need to write more! I have a question though. He said, "Did I lead her on?" at the end. I though he kind of was? That he liked her?

on Feb. 26 2012 at 12:09 am
Ginga-Ninga GOLD, N/A, Minnesota
13 articles 3 photos 44 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never Question Yourself. If someone tells you to change, stay exactly who you are. No one should ever try to change you.

Awkward Moments... Gotta Love Em...

I wish I could write more then a prologue... I get a plot figured out but I try to write the story and feel like it is terrible and quit...


on Feb. 2 2012 at 4:45 pm
mudnainah BRONZE, Barikville, Washington
3 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
it's not in everything that you find happiness, but in happiness you shall find everything.

I loved this story. too bad you stopped :(

Sydney46 said...
on Jan. 13 2012 at 6:06 pm
Sydney46, Yoder, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"You know you are in love when reality is finally better than your dreams," Dr. Seuss

You have to keep writing you cant just leave us hanging like this!

on Jan. 10 2012 at 3:18 pm
hannahbbycakes, Brownsburg, Indiana
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Haha. Well, I might get back to it, who knows! (:

on Jan. 8 2012 at 4:40 pm
Kitty.Meow.Daly SILVER, Clarksville, Tennessee
9 articles 0 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Cowards die many times before their deaths, The valiant never taste of death but once." - Spakespeare
Life is pain, Highness. Anyone who tells you differently is selling something ~Wesley
Dare to move~ A Walk to Remember

:O just leave us hanging like that, I bet your next piece is gonna be just as good :D

on Jan. 8 2012 at 3:18 pm
hannahbbycakes, Brownsburg, Indiana
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Thank you SO much to everyone who's commented. (: It means so much to me. I'm afraid that I've kind of abandoned this plot. But I'm happy to say that I'm working on a new piece that I'll be uploading soon! (:

on Jan. 6 2012 at 5:10 pm
Kitty.Meow.Daly SILVER, Clarksville, Tennessee
9 articles 0 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Cowards die many times before their deaths, The valiant never taste of death but once." - Spakespeare
Life is pain, Highness. Anyone who tells you differently is selling something ~Wesley
Dare to move~ A Walk to Remember

Please finish!!! I'm hooked!!!

on Dec. 30 2011 at 6:32 pm
rayosunshine BRONZE, Marietta, Georgia
2 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
It's not the power of the curse, it's the power you give the curse." - Penelope

Omg! I need to know what happens next! Please write more!

on Dec. 30 2011 at 5:02 pm
PrincessSparkleStar BRONZE, Michigan
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I Really likethis story! I wish every boy would choose the girl nxt door. Please write more and please check out my poem, remember that day?

on Dec. 30 2011 at 12:59 pm
selahoverrated GOLD, Mt Sidney, Virginia
11 articles 0 photos 43 comments
pllllleeeeeaaaaaaaaasssssssssseeeeee write more!!!!!!!


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