Loner

March 25, 2011
By BabyJ SILVER, Herndon, Virginia
BabyJ SILVER, Herndon, Virginia
5 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Summary:

Alec Steven has always avoided people as they do the same to him. He's a loner. That is until Shay Linberg moves to town. She is gorgeous, spontaneous, and does everything that Alec doesn't expect. As their friendship grows, many people in their high school don't like that the town loner isn't so lonely any more.


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Loner


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on Sep. 25 2011 at 6:00 pm
MiNdLeSsLuVeRgIrL BRONZE, Kenly, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
If you love something let it go, if it comes back its yours if it doesn't, it never was!

girl we bout to have a problem if you don't writ more :) plzzzzzzzzzzzz

on Aug. 10 2011 at 12:12 pm
Country_Storm_Inspired, The Colony, Texas
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Scuse me ma'm but were gonna have a serious problem on our hands unless yOu write more...like soon. Kthanksbye(: haha I LOVED it!!!! Maybe you could read my story? I would very much appreciate it(:!!(::

on Jun. 9 2011 at 11:52 pm
becauseHeloves BRONZE, Chesapeake, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
Proverbs 8:12, 14 "I wisdom dwell with prudence, and find out knowledge of witty inventions. Counsel is mine, and sound wisdom: I am understanding; I have strength."

I'm sorry if i'm being blunt but there is no debate, at least to say there should be no debate. You MUST finish this. Otherwise, I would have waisted many, many seconds of my life checking to see if there were any chapter updates or additions. Ok? No, I take that question mark back- I'm not asking. LOL

on Jun. 8 2011 at 5:50 pm
twizzlerluva97 GOLD, New York City, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Success comes to those who persist after all have given up. Which is why it is never crowded along the extra mile."

YES PLEASE PLEASE MORE I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS

on Jun. 7 2011 at 2:35 pm
FallenAngel1 SILVER, Chula Vista, California
9 articles 0 photos 68 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Good Night, good night! Parting is such sweet sorrow, that i shall say good night till it be morrow."-Romeo and Juliet act II scene II, William Shakespeare
"What's In a name? That which we call a rosse by any other name would smell as sweet."-Romeo

You should definetly write a sequel to Loner, i would read it if you did and i am sure that tons of other people would too. PLEASE, you should write more.

on Jun. 5 2011 at 4:33 pm
Ariel_Berrot DIAMOND, Lansing, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Like men we'll face the murderous, cowardly pack, pressed to the wall--Dying but fighting back." -Claude Mckay

nessicarily, because they still wouldnt be wearing ALL black . . .

H.N.L SILVER said...
on Jun. 1 2011 at 11:20 am
H.N.L SILVER, Streetman, Texas
5 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live life to the fullest

write more please. this is a really good story.

on May. 4 2011 at 9:49 pm
A.PaigeTurner, San Antonio, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
You think that everybody hates you. You should really stop that.- A Good Friend

I love this story!  Keep writing please!  Your main character, Alec, is very mysterious and hurt, although he refuses to admit it, and I'd love to keep reading about him.

MAGZ said...
on Apr. 18 2011 at 10:50 pm
i love this but u should finish it...

HappyBoat said...
on Apr. 18 2011 at 10:15 pm

Chapter 1: I really do like your story. Its well written, and I like your upbeat writing style. But one thing bothered me, wouldn't he, by lending a cold stranger his jacket, (dark clothing contributed to his oddballness) pass on the oddness? In a way....

 


Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Mar. 31 2011 at 5:50 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love.
Henry Drummond

Finish the story!

on Mar. 29 2011 at 3:09 pm
FallenAngel1 SILVER, Chula Vista, California
9 articles 0 photos 68 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Good Night, good night! Parting is such sweet sorrow, that i shall say good night till it be morrow."-Romeo and Juliet act II scene II, William Shakespeare
"What's In a name? That which we call a rosse by any other name would smell as sweet."-Romeo

This is very interesting. I hope that you write more, you are very talented. I would love to see how their story will end. Keep up the good work. :-)


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