If i wanted...

March 16, 2011
By ThisIsRivera SILVER, orchardlake, Michigan
ThisIsRivera SILVER, Orchardlake, Michigan
6 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Some people never go crazy. What truly horrible lives they must lead."


Summary:

Hunter had everything. She had her best friends, a job she loved although it was working at a swirlberry, MIFA, and the love of her life. She played life and she played it well but when everything comes to a devastating halt. It can only go downhill from there. Will it be her downfall, will it change everything?


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If i wanted...


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on Mar. 27 2011 at 11:54 am
ThisIsRivera SILVER, Orchardlake, Michigan
6 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Some people never go crazy. What truly horrible lives they must lead."

haha thanks!!

TheDuck GOLD said...
on Mar. 23 2011 at 5:46 pm
TheDuck GOLD, Braselton, Georgia
11 articles 12 photos 77 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Raids, bullets, crime... no problem. A missing duster? Crisis."-The Last Sacrifice
"If we stand for nothing, we'll fall for anything." -All Time Low

If they don't, they're stupid.  This is an awesome story!

on Mar. 23 2011 at 4:58 pm
ThisIsRivera SILVER, Orchardlake, Michigan
6 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Some people never go crazy. What truly horrible lives they must lead."

oh okay that makes sense i just didnt want people to tire of it and stop reading

 


TheDuck GOLD said...
on Mar. 23 2011 at 4:10 pm
TheDuck GOLD, Braselton, Georgia
11 articles 12 photos 77 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Raids, bullets, crime... no problem. A missing duster? Crisis."-The Last Sacrifice
"If we stand for nothing, we'll fall for anything." -All Time Low

You know, I think you should keep it.  It shows how the action progresses.

on Mar. 23 2011 at 4:04 pm
ThisIsRivera SILVER, Orchardlake, Michigan
6 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Some people never go crazy. What truly horrible lives they must lead."

thank you so much that means alot and i no im trying to think of ways to make the begining a bit better any suggestions?

TheDuck GOLD said...
on Mar. 19 2011 at 9:21 pm
TheDuck GOLD, Braselton, Georgia
11 articles 12 photos 77 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Raids, bullets, crime... no problem. A missing duster? Crisis."-The Last Sacrifice
"If we stand for nothing, we'll fall for anything." -All Time Low

Slow start with a great middle and a satisfying ending.  Beautifully written




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