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If i wanted...

If i wanted...
Summary: Hunter had everything. She had her best friends, a job she loved although it was working at a swirlberry, MIFA, and the love of her life. She played life and she played it well but when everything comes to a devastating halt. It can only go downhill from there. Will it be her downfall, will it change everything?

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AnarchyIsMyFriend said...
Mar. 19, 2011 at 9:21 pm
Slow start with a great middle and a satisfying ending.  Beautifully written
ThisIsRivera replied...
Mar. 23, 2011 at 4:04 pm
thank you so much that means alot and i no im trying to think of ways to make the begining a bit better any suggestions?
AnarchyIsMyFriend replied...
Mar. 23, 2011 at 4:10 pm
You know, I think you should keep it.  It shows how the action progresses.
ThisIsRivera replied...
Mar. 23, 2011 at 4:58 pm

oh okay that makes sense i just didnt want people to tire of it and stop reading


AnarchyIsMyFriend replied...
Mar. 23, 2011 at 5:46 pm
If they don't, they're stupid.  This is an awesome story!
ThisIsRivera replied...
Mar. 27, 2011 at 11:54 am
haha thanks!!

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