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HomeThe Man Who Can't Be Moved
The Man Who Can't Be Moved
Summary: Jenna's boyfriend, Luke, is over in Australia. When he calls and says he won't be home for Christmas, Jenna is forced to take some drastic measures
TheGoodTwinYeah, sorry about that. At first, Jenna was a guy, and Luke was a girl, so I forgot to switch some of the genders
Vanendra
Its a really good story and every time I hear that song, I do start to wonder what an excellent story it could form. I agree with Mysteryheart about the He's and She's though,I was getting a little confused.
Just a side note for you on your words... you kept referring jenna as a guy... the police officer kept calling her Son and Sir. and then you also referried to Amy as him.. just watch out for that cause it really confused for the longset time.and the meet and greet at thr end could have had a little more emotion and detail
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