Dreams and Popcorn

March 13, 2011
By julietmonroe5683 BRONZE, Alpharetta, Georgia
julietmonroe5683 BRONZE, Alpharetta, Georgia
2 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
She who kneels before God can stand before anyone.


Summary:

Robby was my best friend. I told him everything; I had ever since we met and realized we got along so well. But there was one thing I never told him. I would never lie to him about anything, but this secret jeopardized our friendship. I loved Robby. I didn't have a crush, I didn't want the title of "girlfriend," no--I was deeply in love and I couldn't tell him. But he found out anyway.


Juliet M.

Dreams and Popcorn


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on Apr. 5 2012 at 4:24 pm
Zuccini75 BRONZE, Chantilly, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"It is better to keep your mouth shut and let people wonder, than telling them yourself."
-Myself

I agree with Bookworm1998- the format was good, and better than a lot of published books - elongate this and publish, you WILL become a millionaire!

Maxbug said...
on Apr. 5 2012 at 2:54 pm
I enjoyed it very much. It gave me chills when he kissed you for the first time in the rain. I would of prefered the rain as well. Love it <3

LittleMiss said...
on Jan. 8 2012 at 11:05 am
LittleMiss, Jackson, Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
The pen is mightier than the sword

I love this because me and my boyfriend were bestfriends first wasted two and a half years and are now making up for it you are an amazing writer

on Sep. 15 2011 at 8:12 pm
Bookworm1998 GOLD, Brampton, Other
17 articles 2 photos 118 comments

Favorite Quote:
Preserve your memories, keep them well; what you forget, you can never retell.

soooo cute! yea, i rlly dont get girls with rain - i much prefer a nice warm day in the grass (but thats probably just me :P) this is relly good! and i love that u seperated the quotes into different lines each time: it made it a lot easier to read. good job!

on Aug. 3 2011 at 3:05 pm
julietmonroe5683 BRONZE, Alpharetta, Georgia
2 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
She who kneels before God can stand before anyone.

Thanks so much!

This was originally a short story, but then someone commented and said it was too long and I should make it a book instead. It was never really meant to have action or conflict. But I'm working on a much longer book, Soulful Eyes, that definitely will! :)


on Aug. 3 2011 at 2:35 pm
Blue4indigo PLATINUM, Sturbridge, Connecticut
24 articles 0 photos 382 comments

Favorite Quote:
I'd rather be sorry for something that I did than for something I didn't do.
-Red Scott

How is it that you manage to write such amazing things in this genre?

5/5 stars! Perfect, but short :)

Only, you might want to start some sort of conflict, to make the story something besides hapiness and love.



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