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Dreams and Popcorn

Juliet M.
Dreams and Popcorn
Summary: Robby was my best friend. I told him everything; I had ever since we met and realized we got along so well. But there was one thing I never told him. I would never lie to him about anything, but this secret jeopardized our friendship. I loved Robby. I didn't have a crush, I didn't want the title of "girlfriend," no--I was deeply in love and I couldn't tell him. But he found out anyway.

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Zuccini75 said...
Apr. 5, 2012 at 4:24 pm
I agree with Bookworm1998- the format was good, and better than a lot of published books - elongate this and publish, you WILL become a millionaire!
Maxbug said...
Apr. 5, 2012 at 2:54 pm
I enjoyed it very much. It gave me chills when he kissed you for the first time in the rain. I would of prefered the rain as well. Love it <3
Bookworm1998 said...
Sept. 15, 2011 at 8:12 pm
soooo cute! yea, i rlly dont get girls with rain - i much prefer a nice warm day in the grass (but thats probably just me :P) this is relly good! and i love that u seperated the quotes into different lines each time: it made it a lot easier to read. good job!
Blue4 said...
Aug. 3, 2011 at 2:35 pm

How is it that you manage to write such amazing things in this genre?

5/5 stars! Perfect, but short :)

Only, you might want to start some sort of conflict, to make the story something besides hapiness and love.

julietmonroee5683 replied...
Aug. 3, 2011 at 3:05 pm

Thanks so much!

This was originally a short story, but then someone commented and said it was too long and I should make it a book instead. It was never really meant to have action or conflict. But I'm working on a much longer book, Soulful Eyes, that definitely will! :)

LittleMiss replied...
Jan. 8, 2012 at 11:05 am
I love this because me and my boyfriend were bestfriends first wasted two and a half years and are now making up for it you are an amazing writer

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