Choices in Love

March 7, 2011
By Smartie4Life BRONZE, Scottsdale, Arizona
Smartie4Life BRONZE, Scottsdale, Arizona
1 article 0 photos 12 comments

Summary:

Amber has a perfect boyfriend who loves her and a best friend who would do anything for her. But her best friend doesn't know about her boyfriend. When Amber discovers a secret, will she sacrifice her perfect relationship or her friendship?


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on Oct. 13 2012 at 5:42 pm
Aerobeast SILVER, W Harrison, Indiana
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i loved it! absolutely magnificent! keep writing :)

on Oct. 9 2011 at 10:05 pm
Smartie4Life BRONZE, Scottsdale, Arizona
1 article 0 photos 12 comments
Thank you!

on Aug. 4 2011 at 1:51 pm
Mallorie McNeil, Sarasota, Florida
0 articles 0 photos 1 comment
LOVED IT. please keep writing

on Jul. 5 2011 at 3:58 pm
Smartie4Life BRONZE, Scottsdale, Arizona
1 article 0 photos 12 comments
Thank you! Can you get it more publicity please?

on Jul. 5 2011 at 2:12 pm
Bookworm1998 GOLD, Brampton, Other
17 articles 2 photos 118 comments

Favorite Quote:
Preserve your memories, keep them well; what you forget, you can never retell.

this is great! it would even better if u lengthened it! other than that, no comments except, I LUV IT!

on Jun. 28 2011 at 1:45 pm
Angie_101 BRONZE, Minneapolis Mnn, Minnesota
2 articles 2 photos 23 comments
yo welcome....n sure thing:)

on Jun. 28 2011 at 12:13 pm
Smartie4Life BRONZE, Scottsdale, Arizona
1 article 0 photos 12 comments
Thanks! Can you please ask others to read and rate too?

on May. 31 2011 at 5:55 pm
Angie_101 BRONZE, Minneapolis Mnn, Minnesota
2 articles 2 photos 23 comments
10 words 4 u, I Loved It, and I can't wait to read more.

on May. 22 2011 at 12:57 am
Writomania PLATINUM, New Delhi, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"What really does not kill you, will only make you stronger"- Kanye West
"If there was no electricity, we would've had to watch the television by candle light"- Joe Jonas
Nobody will ever win the Battle of the Sexes. There's just too much fraternizing with the enemy. ~Henry Kissinger

hi smartie4life.. your pitch seems really good and so does your first chapter.. that was all that i could read in one go :P

anyway, i think that you shoukd make the short pitch a little longer and more detailed so that it intrigues the reader because your story is very absorbing but that pitch needs some work.

Nicely written :P

I was wondering if you could check out my work, "the diary of a teenaged lunatic">?

Thanks..


on Apr. 7 2011 at 11:15 pm
Smartie4Life BRONZE, Scottsdale, Arizona
1 article 0 photos 12 comments
Thanks for the feedback!

triathlete99 said...
on Apr. 5 2011 at 10:01 pm
triathlete99, Atlanta, Georgia
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Sooooo good!!! I want to read more! Keep writing, you're really good!

on Apr. 5 2011 at 8:21 pm
Smartie4Life BRONZE, Scottsdale, Arizona
1 article 0 photos 12 comments
Thank you so much! That means a lot!

on Apr. 5 2011 at 7:59 pm
AprilSunshine BRONZE, Irwin, Pennsylvania
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This is amazing! Oh my gosh I love it! i cried my eyes out!! Oh my gosh! Soooo good! keep writing!!!!! :D

on Mar. 10 2011 at 10:21 pm
Smartie4Life BRONZE, Scottsdale, Arizona
1 article 0 photos 12 comments
Thank you so much! This means a lot to me!

SHEMUNNI<3 said...
on Mar. 10 2011 at 10:04 pm
This author did a fantastic job with language, imagery, diction, detail, and syntax. She must go to a very credible school and have wonderful teachers and friends. The author demonstrates great control of the english language, while delivering a short story with an interesting plot line and an original style.




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