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Choices in Love

Choices in Love
Summary: Amber has a perfect boyfriend who loves her and a best friend who would do anything for her. But her best friend doesn't know about her boyfriend. When Amber discovers a secret, will she sacrifice her perfect relationship or her friendship?

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Aerobeast This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 13, 2012 at 5:42 pm
i loved it! absolutely magnificent! keep writing :)
Mallorie M. said...
Aug. 4, 2011 at 1:51 pm
LOVED IT. please keep writing
Smartie4Life replied...
Oct. 9, 2011 at 10:05 pm
Thank you!
Bookworm1998 said...
Jul. 5, 2011 at 2:12 pm
this is great! it would even better if u lengthened it! other than that, no comments except, I LUV IT!
Smartie4Life replied...
Jul. 5, 2011 at 3:58 pm
Thank you! Can you get it more publicity please?
Angie_101 said...
May 31, 2011 at 5:55 pm
10 words 4 u, I Loved It, and I can't wait to read more.
Smartie4Life replied...
Jun. 28, 2011 at 12:13 pm
Thanks! Can you please ask others to read and rate too?
Angie_101 replied...
Jun. 28, 2011 at 1:45 pm
yo welcome....n sure thing:)
Writomania This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 22, 2011 at 12:57 am

hi smartie4life.. your pitch seems really good and so does your first chapter.. that was all that i could read in one go :P

anyway, i think that you shoukd make the short pitch a little longer and more detailed so that it intrigues the reader because your story is very absorbing but that pitch needs some work.

Nicely written :P

I was wondering if you could check out my work, "the diary of a teenaged lunatic">?


triathlete99 said...
Apr. 5, 2011 at 10:01 pm
Sooooo good!!! I want to read more! Keep writing, you're really good!
Smartie4Life replied...
Apr. 7, 2011 at 11:15 pm
Thanks for the feedback!
AprilSunshine said...
Apr. 5, 2011 at 7:59 pm
This is amazing! Oh my gosh I love it! i cried my eyes out!! Oh my gosh! Soooo good! keep writing!!!!! :D
Smartie4Life replied...
Apr. 5, 2011 at 8:21 pm
Thank you so much! That means a lot!
SHEMUNNI<3 said...
Mar. 10, 2011 at 10:04 pm
This author did a fantastic job with language, imagery, diction, detail, and syntax. She must go to a very credible school and have wonderful teachers and friends. The author demonstrates great control of the english language, while delivering a short story with an interesting plot line and an original style.
Smartie4Life replied...
Mar. 10, 2011 at 10:21 pm
Thank you so much! This means a lot to me!

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