Me and Gangs Don't Mix Well

March 2, 2011
By CareBear15, Maple Valley, Washington
CareBear15, Maple Valley, Washington
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Summary:

Courtney witnessed her brother and her boyfriend shooting someone...secrets and lies comes out, more than she can handle. So she leaves for three years only to get caught up in gangs again when someone seeks revenge on her brother.
Will love and protection that's been lost for three years overcome the need to live in the past?


CareBear15

Me and Gangs Don't Mix Well


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Kay_Kay GOLD said...
on Jun. 23 2012 at 5:38 am
Kay_Kay GOLD, Maclagan, Other
10 articles 34 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't dream your life, live your dream."

Oh I love it! It is so different from the other romance books i've been pouring over (guilty >_> ) that hint of danger is just epic! I love it so much!
Please please please say there is going to be a new chapter (or 10) up soon? :D

P.S. I hope this doesn't come out rude... i don't mean it bad... but, proof reading helps... there are a few little errors that could easily be fixed by proofing it :)

on Feb. 11 2012 at 11:16 pm
DirectingGabs GOLD, Texas, Texas
19 articles 1 photo 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"No one can make you feel inferior without your consent.\"

darn... that was amazing! But, a quick tip. When you write try not to repeat words. Like for example: I walked to the door and closed the door behind me. It just makes your writing alot more respected. Besides that you have ALOT of talent! Finish the story before I go crazy!:D

aubreyflosm said...
on Aug. 11 2011 at 1:04 am
wow...that was an amazing story u should really write more :) i thank this is one of my favorite stories!

Anonymous said...
on Jul. 26 2011 at 7:41 pm
This is so great please add more!

jazzy13 said...
on Jun. 9 2011 at 9:27 pm
wow! i totaly LOVED it! is this book sold in stores? i wanna buy it!! this book is one of my favs. i hope many of your other viewers will loves this to. writen any others yet??

on Jun. 8 2011 at 8:16 pm
JustAnotherDay. BRONZE, Andover, Ohio
2 articles 1 photo 130 comments

Favorite Quote:
Stephen Fry - There are many people out there that will tell you that "you can't". What you've got to do is turn around and say, "watch me."

You need another one QUICK (: That was amazing! Please hurry.

on May. 17 2011 at 11:19 am
Ashley_Tucker, Granger, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
Of course it is happening inside your head, Harry, but why on earth should that mean that it is not real? ~ Albus Dumbledore

Before moving on to the next chapters, you really, really need to edit the first few. It's good, but it would be worthy of 4 stars if it wasn't so hard to read. Punctuation really makes a difference.

on Apr. 29 2011 at 5:33 pm
Donttrust BRONZE, Fort Collins, Colorado
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Sweet! you should let me know

(such as comment on this again haha :) )

CareBear15 said...
on Apr. 28 2011 at 10:41 pm
CareBear15, Maple Valley, Washington
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Thank you sooo much! That means alot! Anyway as soon as I finish writing the next chapter I'll update it :) thanks again

on Apr. 28 2011 at 4:33 pm
Donttrust BRONZE, Fort Collins, Colorado
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can you add more please :)
I'm addicted I love it!

CareBear15 said...
on Apr. 25 2011 at 9:09 pm
CareBear15, Maple Valley, Washington
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i'm posting the next chapter soon, I'm behind on updating on this site. However I have several chapters that need to go up. I'm hoping in the next few months it will be up

lillybud7 said...
on Apr. 25 2011 at 9:01 pm
lillybud7, Sheridan, Wyoming
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love it!

Nice i liked how you changed perspectives, when is going to be done?


CareBear15 said...
on Mar. 4 2011 at 2:32 pm
No its not done yet actaully still a work in progress and i will be posting the new chapter shortly

iluvreading said...
on Mar. 4 2011 at 2:16 pm
hey is this done yet???




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