They're only animal instincts

January 25, 2011
By Yamini, iola, Texas
Yamini, Iola, Texas
0 articles 4 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Years of love have been forgot, In the hatred of a minute." edgar allan poe
i have many more but not enough room


Summary:

The person that her heart and body was marked for didn't want her and inside her it was killing her slowly, leading her away from her true form there was nothing she could do but hide the true pain that still inhabited her body. unwilling to let him know about it, what would he say?


Yamini

They're only animal instincts


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on Jul. 12 2012 at 6:58 pm
Free_One PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
40 articles 1 photo 773 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am not invincible or unstoppable, but I stay strong because it is the only way to survive in this world."

I Loved this!!!! Please! PLEASE! Write more!!!! You can't leave it like that!!! :D Great job!!!!

 

~Free :)(:


on May. 9 2011 at 11:37 am
DarkenedSparrow, Tempe, Arizona
0 articles 4 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The Key To Your Passion Is To Never Give Up."

Even if there are spelling errors, this is a very interesting book. It being in first person makes me feel like someone is actually speaking about their life. Keep it up and great job!

Yamini said...
on Apr. 7 2011 at 11:08 pm
Yamini, Iola, Texas
0 articles 4 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Years of love have been forgot, In the hatred of a minute." edgar allan poe
i have many more but not enough room

Thank you :) that made my day 

triathlete99 said...
on Apr. 7 2011 at 6:42 pm
triathlete99, Atlanta, Georgia
0 articles 0 photos 17 comments
This is very good, even with the spelling and grammar errors. Continue the rest, it's quite addicting. :)

Yamini said...
on Mar. 30 2011 at 4:57 pm
Yamini, Iola, Texas
0 articles 4 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Years of love have been forgot, In the hatred of a minute." edgar allan poe
i have many more but not enough room

thank you :) 

And I suck at writting because of that the grammar problems


on Mar. 30 2011 at 4:49 pm
FallenAngel1 SILVER, Chula Vista, California
9 articles 0 photos 68 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Good Night, good night! Parting is such sweet sorrow, that i shall say good night till it be morrow."-Romeo and Juliet act II scene II, William Shakespeare
"What's In a name? That which we call a rosse by any other name would smell as sweet."-Romeo

It's not bad, there are a few spelling errors and other errors. also some run on sentences, but all in all it is very good. You should be proud that you got this far. :-)

Yamini said...
on Mar. 12 2011 at 3:10 pm
Yamini, Iola, Texas
0 articles 4 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Years of love have been forgot, In the hatred of a minute." edgar allan poe
i have many more but not enough room

thanks for the comment, I'll do my best to fix it.

on Mar. 11 2011 at 6:04 pm
marinashutup GOLD, Fair Oaks, California
18 articles 11 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Isn't life a series of images that change as they repeat themselves?" -Andy Warhol

I didn't read very much because I couldn't get past the glaring punctuation errors. I think it needs work, especially the run-on sentences, which readers will find very off putting.

Yamini said...
on Feb. 26 2011 at 7:45 pm
Yamini, Iola, Texas
0 articles 4 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Years of love have been forgot, In the hatred of a minute." edgar allan poe
i have many more but not enough room

thanks!! and i will most deffinitely continue :)

on Feb. 25 2011 at 11:40 pm
Donttrust BRONZE, Fort Collins, Colorado
1 article 2 photos 44 comments
you should deffinetley continue with it.

Yamini said...
on Feb. 22 2011 at 6:20 pm
Yamini, Iola, Texas
0 articles 4 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Years of love have been forgot, In the hatred of a minute." edgar allan poe
i have many more but not enough room

OMG!!! I PUT THE WRONG NAME ITS SUPPOSED TO BE LACEY NOT HOLLY SORRY I WILL FIX THIS AS SOON AS POSSIBLE... SORRY AGAIN

Yamini said...
on Jan. 29 2011 at 3:56 pm
Yamini, Iola, Texas
0 articles 4 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Years of love have been forgot, In the hatred of a minute." edgar allan poe
i have many more but not enough room

it's a hawk that's supposed to be a guardian haha and the pain is something along the lines of soul mate i want to continue writing chapters so let me know if you would like to continue reading

TARDISin221B said...
on Jan. 29 2011 at 11:06 am
TARDISin221B,
0 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
Merp

interesting. was the bird a pheonix or something? what was with the pain whenever Kaleb came close to her? I wonder. Very mind twisting. I like it




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