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One Quiet Whisper

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RoseOzera
One Quiet Whisper
Summary: Fransiska is starting her new life, in a new country, with new dreams. In America, she meets Duane. Strong, handsome, romantic Duane. together they explore their new found love, and being a new life together.





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Mighty Hunter said...
Nov. 8, 2011 at 8:10 pm:
i love this story! you could definately make this into a full blown novel and i would read it and own a hardback copy!
 
The Creator!!! replied...
Nov. 10, 2011 at 10:08 am :
MIGHTY HUNTER!! the creator commends you!!! ^.^
 
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Marlene said...
Feb. 3, 2011 at 7:36 pm:
Wow!! I had no idea you had such a talent.  Now I can say I am related to a PUBLISHED author!  I enjoyed reading it.
 
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Mark said...
Jan. 31, 2011 at 7:59 pm:
Thanks for posting Amanda!  Keep on writing!
 
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lgardner2112 said...
Jan. 27, 2011 at 4:15 pm:
I really loved this book.  Brilliantly written and full of emotion.  I really liked the title too.  Good job!
 
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Katie said...
Jan. 22, 2011 at 12:52 pm:
this is sooooo good!!! i am amazed! with a masterpiece like this, you could make it big XD
 
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(Summ)one ;) said...
Jan. 21, 2011 at 6:32 pm:
Wow this is good. I'm jealous right now.. The only serious story I ever wrote I threw away becuase it was REALLY bad :/
 
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Alex Kearns said...
Jan. 21, 2011 at 1:56 pm:

Overall this was a good short story to read.  Full of emotion at every turn of the page.  Few things to consider:

1.) Make sure you spell/grammar/punctuation check.  Some qotation marks were missing and at one point I found a random backslash.

2.) One thing that was really getting to me was the fact that it was jumping around alot.  It would be a better reading experience to your audience if you kept your story like a flowing river with no... (more »)

 
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Meggy said...
Jan. 21, 2011 at 12:30 pm:
absolutly amazing! i love this with all my heart, and i can relate to this.
 
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