My Vampire Love

January 18, 2011
By Jemma1011, Siparia, Other
Jemma1011, Siparia, Other
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Summary:

When Jen learns that she is about to get married to a stranger, she vows that she will ruin his life. But what happens when she discovers that he is a vampire and more importantly that she is falling in love with him.


Jemma C.

My Vampire Love


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on Jun. 23 2011 at 11:31 pm
savannah tranby, Hawarden, Iowa
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please please pleas dont let that be the end thay cant die :(

on Jun. 18 2011 at 2:02 pm
BrownEyedGirl GOLD, San Antonio, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
If life were easy, where is the adventure?
If you never leap, you will never know what it is like to fly.

They better not die if they die I will scream!!  It was a really good story line! I hope you write what happens next!!!

on Jun. 15 2011 at 9:08 am
just-another-url GOLD, Cannes, Other
16 articles 6 photos 151 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's a good thing to be strange. Normalness leads to sadness." -Philip Lester

omg don't let them both die :( please tell me that she'll just become a made vamp and he only passed out ! This has literally gotten me trough my school year, I come home each day and run to the computer to see if you added more since the day before ! And even if school's over, you can't just kill them off ! There's still so much to add, but I'll stop here... just please continue this story:) I'm your n#1 fan !

on Jun. 14 2011 at 7:03 pm
FallenAngel1 SILVER, Chula Vista, California
9 articles 0 photos 68 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Good Night, good night! Parting is such sweet sorrow, that i shall say good night till it be morrow."-Romeo and Juliet act II scene II, William Shakespeare
"What's In a name? That which we call a rosse by any other name would smell as sweet."-Romeo

Oh My GOD!!! That was AWESOME, it was suspenceful and i just wanted to cry. He loved her but he was acting like a maniac. He did not want to lose her but he was making her be afraid of him. I wanted to hold him but i also wanted to slap him!!! As soon as i was done reading i screamed "Oh My God!" My dad loked at me as if i had lost it. Ha ha. PLEASE write more, i am addicted. I am literaly shaking after reading this last chapter. Will she die? Will she turn into a made vampire, because she drowned or will Eric be able to save her? Please write more. Stupendous work by the way.

on Jun. 14 2011 at 3:27 pm
AbbyOliver6 BRONZE, New York, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Every cloud has a silver lining" and "I don't get distracted easil-SQUIRREL!"

WHAT?!?!? HOW CAN IT END LIKE THAT?!?!?! PLEASE ADD MORE, I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENED TO JEN AND ERIC!

on Jun. 7 2011 at 10:50 am
Pleaase Keep Writinqq It is Verry Interestinqq My ActuaL Firstt Book Ivee Readd EntireLy On This WebbSitee

orangeapple said...
on Jun. 6 2011 at 1:55 am
okay first off I started reading this at midnight and its 2:54pm it kept me up thinking how wonderful this is pleasepleasepleaseplease keep going

Chloe3395 said...
on Jun. 3 2011 at 1:52 pm
Chloe3395, Millers Creek, North Carolina
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Please keep going! This is amazing!

on Jun. 1 2011 at 12:17 pm
FallenAngel1 SILVER, Chula Vista, California
9 articles 0 photos 68 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Good Night, good night! Parting is such sweet sorrow, that i shall say good night till it be morrow."-Romeo and Juliet act II scene II, William Shakespeare
"What's In a name? That which we call a rosse by any other name would smell as sweet."-Romeo

W-O-W pleasae go on. This is really good. You should write more.

on May. 29 2011 at 9:33 am
AbbyOliver6 BRONZE, New York, New York
1 article 0 photos 57 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every cloud has a silver lining" and "I don't get distracted easil-SQUIRREL!"

Ohhhhhhhhh please add more!!!!!

RRRRR BRONZE said...
on May. 25 2011 at 9:36 pm
RRRRR BRONZE, Orrville, Ohio
1 article 1 photo 83 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Education is when you read the fine print. Experience is when you don't."- Pete Seeger

"I didn't quit because I wasn't strong enough to live through it, i stopped because i was strong enough to move on." -Unknown

Okay.. 

1. I love this plot

2. I read this all at one time

3. PLEASE CONTINUE IT

4. I hate to say it, but they are some grammar mistakes and misspellings that are a little distracting.

5. I STILL LOVE THIS BOOK


on May. 24 2011 at 5:50 pm
Bookworm2144 BRONZE, Elmont, New York
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Favorite Quote:
You can never get everything that you want in life.

WOW this is awesome

iloveyou said...
on May. 24 2011 at 3:59 am
tell me thats not the end. please right more.

on May. 19 2011 at 5:58 am
just-another-url GOLD, Cannes, Other
16 articles 6 photos 151 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's a good thing to be strange. Normalness leads to sadness." -Philip Lester

I loved it !!!! please keep writing and you did a great job with your characters :) 

on May. 18 2011 at 5:29 am
AbbyOliver6 BRONZE, New York, New York
1 article 0 photos 57 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every cloud has a silver lining" and "I don't get distracted easil-SQUIRREL!"

Haha Charde sounds SO cool!!!!!!

BookWorm said...
on May. 17 2011 at 7:28 pm
I love this story so much. Out of all the stories I have read, this is one of the only that has a good chance of being published. I love your creativity and your writing is very sophisticated. Please finish this!! 

ChickyChick said...
on May. 15 2011 at 1:33 pm
ChickyChick, Delta, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"If you wanna see a rainbow, you gotta put up with the rain." "No sacrifice, No victory." "Life is like a box of chocolates..." "you give me the kind of feeling people write novels about." "love means never having to say you're sorry"

Wow, I just came across this and soon as i started reading I COULD NOT PUT IT DOWN. I wouldn't leave my computer till i read it all its simply amazing. I wish Jen would love eric. I hope they become a cute and happy couple. I truely love your writting. its images are so vivide and real. I admire your work. please keep posting :D <3

Jess2525 said...
on May. 8 2011 at 5:56 pm
Jess2525, Briscoe, Texas
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This is great! I absolutely loved it, I can't wait for you to post more! :D

Jemma1011 said...
on Apr. 28 2011 at 9:51 am
Jemma1011, Siparia, Other
0 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Thanks a lot, that means so much to me and i will 9 about finishing it i mean. When i have i'll think about trying to get it published, but right now i'm just taking it one step at a time.

Jemma


on Apr. 27 2011 at 10:27 pm
FallenAngel1 SILVER, Chula Vista, California
9 articles 0 photos 68 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Good Night, good night! Parting is such sweet sorrow, that i shall say good night till it be morrow."-Romeo and Juliet act II scene II, William Shakespeare
"What's In a name? That which we call a rosse by any other name would smell as sweet."-Romeo

Jemma, this is very good. Please continue, you have talent and i was hooked instantly, that is very good. When you are finished i think that you should publish it. It's AWESOME!!! :-) :-)




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