Unorthodox Angel

December 13, 2010
By laurenangela SILVER, Newton, Illinois
laurenangela SILVER, Newton, Illinois
9 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am too weird to live, but much too rare to die," -Synyster Gates, guitarist for Avenged Sevenfold


Summary:

When Phoenix gets shot by her drug-addicted mother, she finds herself in a hospital. She meets a bad boy named Jakobie. He's covered in tattoos, has black hair, and has a distinct air about him. After he saves her life twice, she finds that she can't live without him, and finds the reason he saved her might have to do with angels.


Sidney S.

Unorthodox Angel


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ZoePaliski said...
on Apr. 15 2013 at 8:14 pm
I lost my dad so I understand how you feel about your grandpa. I loved the story, and the last part about your grandpa was so sweet. Keep writing!

on Apr. 10 2013 at 2:10 pm
I read the end of the chapter and I was AWW! Then I read the part to your grandpa and I almost cried. Great story though!

on Jan. 30 2013 at 11:05 am
Love_Jesus18 SILVER, Killeen, Texas
8 articles 0 photos 10 comments
love the story i am glad that it was like twilight and it was very beautiful but i am so sorry about your grandpa....

poemluv BRONZE said...
on Sep. 17 2012 at 11:49 am
poemluv BRONZE, Coolidge, Arizona
2 articles 4 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"When the world shout 'give up' hope whipers 'try it one more time'"

I love it! It's amazing and touching(:

on Mar. 23 2012 at 5:10 pm
nemish23 BRONZE, Sydney, Other
2 articles 0 photos 110 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The happiest people don't necessarily have the best of everything;
They just make the most of everything they have."

"Today is life. The only life we're sure of. Make the most of today." -CSI:NY

It's a little bit like twilight but apart from that it's a great story! I love the characters, especially their names, they are beautiful.

I'm sorry about your grandfather. I lost a relative too and then wrote a story based on it too. 'From My Heart' if you wanna check it out.

It's funny how writing sometimes helps us grieve right?

But keep writing, you have an awesome talent :)


on Mar. 3 2012 at 6:49 pm
Free_One PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
40 articles 1 photo 773 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am not invincible or unstoppable, but I stay strong because it is the only way to survive in this world."

Beautiful! And I'm happy for your Grandpa. :)(:

on Feb. 10 2012 at 5:54 pm
TheNerdGirl PLATINUM, Glen Ellyn, Illinois
26 articles 28 photos 36 comments

Favorite Quote:
Shoot for the moon because even if you miss you'll still end up among the star's

That was so good please keep writing i would love to read more!!! :)

on Jan. 30 2012 at 7:35 pm
BluBirdWriter13, Nowhere, Kentucky
0 articles 0 photos 33 comments
i cried during half of it its so beautifuel

on Jan. 20 2012 at 5:39 am
JustAHappyShadow BRONZE, Bellevue, Washington
3 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Just keep swimming..." Dory-Finding Nemo

This is amazing. You are a terrific writer, and I bet your grandpa is so proud of you and is looking out for you everyday. Thank you for writing this.

Jeera SILVER said...
on Nov. 6 2011 at 4:15 pm
Jeera SILVER, Dowelltown, Tennessee
5 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
Stay strong; be real.

This story is really good and it's pure. :) I like it a lot and your comment at the end is really sweet. I'm sure your grandpa loves it :)

on Oct. 16 2011 at 10:54 am
JustCallMeSarah BRONZE, Iowa Falls, Iowa
1 article 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
'What is faith without trust?'
~ Adam Young

It wont let me add this as a favorite! DX Beautifuly written, loved it =)

on Sep. 23 2011 at 12:23 pm
no1texastiger BRONZE, Palestine, Texas
2 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Only two things are infinate. The universe and human stupidity and I'm not sure about the first one."- Albert Einstein
"Promise me you'll always remember: You're braver than you believe, and stronger than you seem, and smarter than you think."

Aww! I loved this story! Fantastic job!

on Sep. 21 2011 at 4:15 pm
laurenangela SILVER, Newton, Illinois
9 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am too weird to live, but much too rare to die," -Synyster Gates, guitarist for Avenged Sevenfold

thank you!

on Sep. 19 2011 at 7:37 pm
SilverLuna SILVER, _________, Washington
8 articles 0 photos 230 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Come fairies take me out of this dull world, for I would ride with you upon the wind and dance upon the mountains like a flame.".... W.B. Yeats.
"Flying is learning how to throw yourself at the ground and miss." - Douglas Adams

Pretty dang good!(:

. said...
on Aug. 11 2011 at 12:58 pm
Thank you!

. said...
on Aug. 11 2011 at 12:58 pm
thank you!

on Aug. 11 2011 at 10:41 am
MiNdLeSsLuVeRgIrL BRONZE, Kenly, North Carolina
4 articles 0 photos 120 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you love something let it go, if it comes back its yours if it doesn't, it never was!

LOVE IT!Absolutley love it

on Aug. 3 2011 at 7:54 pm
laurenangela SILVER, Newton, Illinois
9 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am too weird to live, but much too rare to die," -Synyster Gates, guitarist for Avenged Sevenfold

thank you so much!

AnyaLafayaa said...
on Aug. 3 2011 at 6:19 pm
AnyaLafayaa, New Freedom, Pennsylvania
0 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is a fire. But whether it is going to warm your heart or burn down your house, you can never tell.


























-Joan Crawford

This story is so amazing! There's not one spelling error, it's sweet, and has a spectacular plot. I'm completely impressed. Honestly, this story deserves to be number one, it's so heart warming and written well. I'm positive your grandfather is proud of you. Nice work!

on Jul. 17 2011 at 6:19 pm
laurenangela SILVER, Newton, Illinois
9 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am too weird to live, but much too rare to die," -Synyster Gates, guitarist for Avenged Sevenfold

thank you!


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