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Mental

December 12, 2010
By atemperamentalsun PLATINUM, Nyack, New York
atemperamentalsun PLATINUM, Nyack, New York
32 articles 3 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
Any Bob Dylan quote, really.
Also...."Don't ever tell anybody anything. If you do, you'll start missing everybody."-J.D. Salinger (The Catcher In The Rye)


Summary:

After an attempt at suicide, Max finds himself stuck in a Psychiatric Ward although, according to him, he doesn't understand why. While there, he meets people, and even falls in love. With the help of the people he meets, he's able to forget the reason he tried to kill himself. And who he killed himself for.


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on Dec. 30 2010 at 5:47 pm
atemperamentalsun PLATINUM, Nyack, New York
32 articles 3 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
Any Bob Dylan quote, really.
Also...."Don't ever tell anybody anything. If you do, you'll start missing everybody."-J.D. Salinger (The Catcher In The Rye)

Thanks!

I'll definitely format it so that it's easier to read.


on Dec. 30 2010 at 5:29 pm
PandaBear PLATINUM, Tucson, Arizona
24 articles 26 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Nobody can make you feel inferior without your consent." --Eleanor Roosevelt

I really like it! I like how you let us into his head and we can see everything from his point of view. Keep writing!

on Dec. 29 2010 at 5:08 pm
dancerforlifex GOLD, Monson, Massachusetts
14 articles 0 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
The meaning of life is to give life a meaning.

Good start! I like where it's going. One thing you could do is just format it a bit. It was a bit difficult to read when the text was all together. It would help readers if it were in paragraphs, but other than that I love the idea!


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