Not Yet But Soon

December 9, 2010
By kelliejo19 GOLD, cannon falls, Minnesota
kelliejo19 GOLD, Cannon Falls, Minnesota
19 articles 7 photos 48 comments

Summary:

" Oh. My. God." Jamie suddenly had a hard time trying to breath. "No. No,no no! You're wrong!" Mascra was dripping down her face, but she couldn't stop now. " No! You can't do this to us! He loves me!" They didn't even blink. " I'm so sorry Miss O'Brian, but this is happening and you and Taylor are going to have to-"
"No! You...it...I..." They all stared at me with vacant eyes, offering their deepest condolances. I couldn't do this. I need to breath. I ran out of that room faster than I have ever ran in my life, but I didn't stop there. I ran past all the doors, numbers blurring, numberous amount of people, blending togather, until my legs gave out. My last thought was I had to see him. Then my world blacked out


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on Apr. 4 2012 at 2:17 pm
Zuccini75 BRONZE, Chantilly, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"It is better to keep your mouth shut and let people wonder, than telling them yourself."
-Myself

Very well written- I really want to read more, the summary really got me hooked, Keep Going!

on Apr. 3 2012 at 9:36 pm
nemish23 BRONZE, Sydney, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"The happiest people don't necessarily have the best of everything;
They just make the most of everything they have."

"Today is life. The only life we're sure of. Make the most of today." -CSI:NY

love it! can't wait to read more!!! :)

on Aug. 11 2011 at 9:37 pm
Country_Storm_Inspired, The Colony, Texas
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Gahhhh you need to write more..now!!! I'm hooked!! Please read mine(:(:!!(:(:

on Jun. 21 2011 at 6:40 am
twizzlerluva97 GOLD, New York City, New York
13 articles 0 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Success comes to those who persist after all have given up. Which is why it is never crowded along the extra mile."

loved it cant wait 4 chapter 3 or 4 w.e. great job cant wait!

on Jun. 17 2011 at 11:15 am
KaylynVictoria SILVER, Breaux Bridge, Louisiana
5 articles 0 photos 77 comments

Favorite Quote:
Always keep your head up so you never have an excuse to look down at yourself(:

Seem likes someone owes their friend $20...

Hah. <3 itt!


on Jun. 1 2011 at 9:32 pm
Stpaulian BRONZE, Kewadin, Michigan
2 articles 0 photos 36 comments

Favorite Quote:
Bad Spellers of the world 'untie'.

I'm so becoming a deadacated reader! Can't wait for the nextt chapter!

on May. 22 2011 at 7:28 pm
kelliejo19 GOLD, Cannon Falls, Minnesota
19 articles 7 photos 48 comments

Hi everybody! Thanks for all your commets!!! They mean ALOT! School is almsot over( yay!) and I'll be happy to say that chapter three is coming VERY soon. :)) Again, thanks for being paitent!

Kel


on Mar. 27 2011 at 6:27 pm
ThisIsRivera SILVER, Orchardlake, Michigan
6 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Some people never go crazy. What truly horrible lives they must lead."

this is AMAZING i simply love it i understand school is hard but hurry up with chapter 3 haha it amazed me to see that you are only in 8th grade bc im 16 and you did a great job showing the emotions of someone thats older hten you you are extremly talented so keep it up and hurry writing!

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on Mar. 5 2011 at 6:33 pm
Untamed, Rincon, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"Always be a first rate version of yourself than a second rate version of someone else."
"The sky is the limit, you can do anything." - my mom

I thought it was a good beginning and I like how you made the characters so real, you drew the reader in.

And could everyone please check out the beginning of my novel The Lovely Rose, feedback would be great thanks!


on Feb. 11 2011 at 2:11 pm
Ebonykitty SILVER, Naples, Florida
8 articles 1 photo 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
You can't run out of dreams. Dreams are the start of everything...

This was wonderful! I loved the realness of Jamie and Ginny, and Taylor. I think it'll be magnificent!

Can't wait to read more!

~Ebony~


on Jan. 20 2011 at 10:44 pm
BrooklynnBlue BRONZE, Simi Valley, California
3 articles 0 photos 10 comments
I love this!!!!!! I really like the end of the chapter. I need to read more!!!!!

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on Jan. 20 2011 at 7:36 pm
TudeWriter, Grayslake, Illinois
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OMG!!!! I loooove it! I need to read more! LOL, and read mine when they are published please! Mask's and The Full Monns Magic

on Jan. 19 2011 at 9:21 pm
kelliejo19 GOLD, Cannon Falls, Minnesota
19 articles 7 photos 48 comments
Thank you!!! I am currently writing the next chapter but alot is going on with school right now but I'm still comin' along!! If you are intrested, you can read my other book in progress, letters to love. and again thanks!! :)

on Jan. 3 2011 at 2:29 pm
reading_under_h2o, Warren, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
I've always imagined that paradice would be a kind of library. -Jorge Luis Borges

This is a really good story line so far, and it seems to be going well, please write more!

on Jan. 2 2011 at 3:17 pm
Shoes4life1212, Welch, Minnesota
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This is really good!!! write more!!

on Dec. 31 2010 at 9:56 am
RedheadAtHeart ELITE, Mountain Home, Idaho
109 articles 0 photos 165 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love with open hands. - Madeleine L'Engle

I really like this!! In the first place it's pretty believable. Ginny, especially, is very well done. Also the mention of Lucy and how she already knows what the house is like is intriguing. Nice job. :)




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