My Invisible Sanctuary

February 27, 2011
By xXxIvyxXx BRONZE, Boston, Massachusetts
xXxIvyxXx BRONZE, Boston, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
You must be the change you wish to see in the world.
—Gandhi


Summary:

Help. SOS. Save Me.

All the signs and yet we only get a harsh comment and a dirty look bsed on our school and behavior. Capital B. A. D.

Why can't they see behind the dark, crowded clouds there's a bright light wanting to be shown? Or a small little ant building a pile a dirt that brings us annoyance and knock it down, but all they wanted was a home to live? Or a place that someone actually cared?

Can they not see that we need...help?


Iliana M.

My Invisible Sanctuary


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on Mar. 3 2011 at 2:35 pm
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg

<.<   ........  >.> ........ <.<    Where's the next chapter?! D; I hope you keep writing more.

on Mar. 2 2011 at 6:39 am
SilentlyRising GOLD, Decatur, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"My pen is the barrel of the gun. Remind me which side you should be on."

This was really good.  I liked it!  Keep going.  Write on!




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