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The Social Class Beast

Author's note: Currently I'm still working on this story. I was inspired by Disney's Beauty and the Beast. I...  Show full author's note »
Author's note: Currently I'm still working on this story. I was inspired by Disney's Beauty and the Beast. I thought, what would a beast be in a high school setting. Heres the results.  « Hide author's note
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Thought a poem might set the begining well
How could I love him?

The Social Class Beast

As I watch him across the room at this feast.

His eyes glow red

And his wrists bleed

He’s like a vampire that always needs to feed.

He’s rude

And crude

Wanting people to fear him.

Yet, I love him

The Social Class Beast

As his eyes scan over me

And a smile forms across his face.

Making me feel like I’m in just the right place.
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Vanendra said...
Nov. 6, 2012 at 9:26 am
New chapter up!!!! hope you all like it :D
RaisaMiri replied...
Nov. 29, 2012 at 8:01 pm
just to make sure i didn't miss it, which chapter is it? sometimes, i don't trust my memory...for all i know, i could've read the new chapter and thought it was one of the old ones..
Vanendra replied...
Nov. 30, 2012 at 9:29 am
chapter 3 might be new for you, its told in KC's point of view...and chapter 4 is the newest one, told in Misti's point of view ^-^ I really hope you like them
RaisaMiri replied...
Dec. 1, 2012 at 6:34 pm
yes of course i like them! :) in one of my stories, art is also a big part of the girl's character, so some of the scenes take place in her art class too...i also have fun writing those sections :)
Vanendra replied...
Dec. 3, 2012 at 10:43 am
Its not just the scene I like writing though, I also love writting their bickering back and forth, most of these chapters I just write to entertain myself lol
RaisaMiri replied...
Dec. 3, 2012 at 8:07 pm
lol mine's the same way...she has this guy she's always fighting and art is usually her escape, except this annoying guy is in her art class this year and they always are going at it in that class...it's a wonderful, entertaining mess 
Vanendra said...
Oct. 22, 2012 at 9:42 am
Meh, new chapters didn't post. Now I gotta skim through them to see what I have to edit out :(
coolbeans said...
Oct. 17, 2012 at 9:48 am
I love italics. oh and your story is awesome. please write more. please! thank you :)           -Your amazing friend Jasmine :D
Vanendra replied...
Mar. 22, 2013 at 10:58 am
...you mean Ashanti? ;D
coolbeans replied...
Mar. 22, 2013 at 11:06 am
Why yes... Of course...
Vanendra said...
Oct. 11, 2012 at 9:42 am
I'm typing up more edited chapters right now, they'll be added in a few weeks so keep checking guys. I'll be adding new chapters as well ^-^
RaisaMiri replied...
Oct. 16, 2012 at 5:32 pm
Yay! I'll have something to look forward to in study hall!
Vanendra replied...
Oct. 17, 2012 at 8:27 am
lol yes, tomorrow I'll post them and sometime next week they should be up ^-^
RaisaMiri replied...
Oct. 17, 2012 at 6:51 pm
okay i'll keep an eye out for them! :D
Vanendra replied...
Nov. 29, 2012 at 8:28 am
posted a new chapter :)
Vanendra said...
Sept. 18, 2012 at 8:22 am
I updated chapter 2. It will be told in KC's point of view. If you don't like how the chapters alternate please tell me. Because writing it seemed a bit repetitive. I am editing the next 2 chapters right now nd hope to have them posted soon ^-^
Vanendra said...
Sept. 12, 2012 at 8:11 am
for anyone who has just started reading my book, I understand the first two chapters don't correspond at all and I am going to fix that soon xD
Vanendra said...
Sept. 11, 2012 at 8:14 am
I'm actually amazed at all the good feedback I'm getting from this... @RaisaMiri: of course theres more!! I just haven't had time to get to a computer in a while... @MidnightSol: well as soon as I get the whole plot line thought out and typed I plan to find a publishing company so that you could have your own copy ^-^
MidnightSol said...
Sept. 10, 2012 at 12:14 pm
I really enjoy reading this story.  I actually look it up when I want something good to read, and I often wish it was in my hands in its entirety.
Vanendra replied...
Sept. 11, 2012 at 8:18 am
well hopefully I'll be finished soon and can get to the publishing process ^-^
RaisaMiri said...
Aug. 19, 2012 at 11:53 am
There will be more...right??? PLEASE TELL ME THERE'S MORE!!!!!!!! :)

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