I Will Not Break

June 25, 2011
By Dudet95 GOLD, ottawa, Kansas
Dudet95 GOLD, Ottawa, Kansas
18 articles 0 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
Your mom, if you don't know the past... You're doomed to repeat it.


Summary:

My breathing sped up, and my heart rate excelled as he turned the corner.
I stood cautiously with my back up against the wall as He edged toward me.
I kept all emotion from my face so he wouldn't know I was freaking out, as my hand hovered over the doorknob.
His Blood red Gaze followed my movement, and He grinned at me, and I gasped.
His teeth were sparkling white, with sharp long fangs.
I yanked the door open, and ran as fast I could, but that didn't stop him.
He grabbed hold of my wrist, and pulled me back to him.

The rain poured down our faces, and dripped down his wavy ear length Black hair.
I tried to tear my gaze from his eyes, but it was no use. They were mesmerizing, and not in the good way.
He brought his hand up, and stroked my cheek.
I tried to pull away but an inhuman growl escaped his cold dead lips.
He leaned down to where his face was inched from mine, and softly whispered in my ear.
" Welcome to the slave trade sweet heart. We will break you. ”


Dudet95

I Will Not Break


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Dudet95 GOLD said...
on Oct. 8 2012 at 11:18 am
Dudet95 GOLD, Ottawa, Kansas
18 articles 0 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
Your mom, if you don't know the past... You're doomed to repeat it.

Thank you so much:) I am in the process of editing all the errors now and that is why I have been taking so long to update the second. lol sorryXD

on Oct. 7 2012 at 1:37 pm
Ms.PeytonLovesHP GOLD, Rancho Cordova, California
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Favorite Quote:
“We are all a little weird and life is a little weird, and when we find someone whose weirdness is compatible with ours, we join up with them and fall in mutual weirdness and call it love.” - Doctor Seuss

Ohmydearsweetlord. Holy guacomole............... I"m about to die. This....... by FAR, is one of the best books I have EVER read, on TeenInk , or published in real life. I applade you. This is........ amazing. I am DEFINETLY going to look for the second one. and HELLS YEAH i'm going to spread the word of this story; because thsi story deserves some SERIOUS recognition. Amazing. I have NO crittisism.... well, maybe with a little editing on the spelling and  grammar errors, but those were slight and barely affcted the overall affect. :)

BlackRaven said...
on Mar. 7 2012 at 1:07 pm
BlackRaven, Brooklyn, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Love,Hate,& happiness.PLAY your music your way!

Ru going to finish

 


BlackRaven said...
on Mar. 5 2012 at 8:13 am
BlackRaven, Brooklyn, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Love,Hate,& happiness.PLAY your music your way!

Please tell me your gonna finish it!!!Pleasssssssssseeee finish it!

 


BlackRaven said...
on Mar. 5 2012 at 8:06 am
BlackRaven, Brooklyn, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Love,Hate,& happiness.PLAY your music your way!

I AM READING THIS EVRY DAY DAY SOO GOOD

BlackRaven said...
on Mar. 5 2012 at 7:57 am
BlackRaven, Brooklyn, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Love,Hate,& happiness.PLAY your music your way!

Most awesomest book ever!Danggirl YOU can write

on Jan. 3 2012 at 4:44 pm
Cheshirekat SILVER, Boise, Idaho
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Favorite Quote:
“A friend might well be reckoned the masterpiece of nature.” - Ralph Waldo Emerson
"Oh you can't avoid that; we're all mad here." - The Cheshire Cat

OMGosh! So amazing!!!!!! I love it!!!!!!!! You have to finish it!!!!!!!!!! Please!!!! Oh, watch out for misspellings and word mixups. You would often say "to" when you meant "two". and you would put "strait" (which means narrow) when it should have been "straight". You also many times put "through" when it should have been "threw". I find that it helps to read through what I have written before posting.

on Oct. 21 2011 at 11:10 am
livethelifeyouwanttolive BRONZE, North Haven, Connecticut
2 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you don't know where you're going, any road will take you there"
- Lewis Caroll (Alice In Wonderland)

I AM OFFICIALLY OBSESSED WITH THIS BOOK!!!

It's AHMAZING!!! Please keep writing. You're very talented. <33


on Sep. 12 2011 at 7:50 pm
My gosh this is good. You're really talented! :)




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