Stay Strong

April 15, 2011
By Brooklynn20, Claypool, Indiana
Brooklynn20, Claypool, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
Dealing with backstabbers, there was one thing I learned. They're only powerful when you got your back turned. -Eminem.


Summary:

I looked up into his eyes and found out the feeling I’ve always had for him was not just lust, but it was real love. I knew that if I wanted him around keeping my feelings quiet would be the best thing to do. He leaned down with a smile and kissed me softly. I knew that we were going to be more than friends in the end.


Brooklynn W.

Stay Strong


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Brooklynn20 said...
on May. 6 2011 at 8:53 am
Brooklynn20, Claypool, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
Dealing with backstabbers, there was one thing I learned. They're only powerful when you got your back turned. -Eminem.

Alex198,

Thankyuu. I know it needs some work. I've redone it too many times and it seems like I always end up changing it somehow in some way. I dont mind the criticism, it helps me get better with my whole writing thing. (:


alex198 said...
on Apr. 29 2011 at 6:42 pm
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I love the end....so sweet :)

You have really great descriptive writing, especially your opening paragraph. It was a great introduction to your story.

I would just say put in some more paragraphs, but that's my only criticism, it just needs to be structured better and then it would be perfect. A really nice novel :)


Brooklynn20 said...
on Apr. 22 2011 at 1:15 pm
Brooklynn20, Claypool, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
Dealing with backstabbers, there was one thing I learned. They're only powerful when you got your back turned. -Eminem.

hey brook (:

yeah its nicole i know i am on yurs haha(: i love you so muchhhh hahahaha., (: yu love me too right yu effing better.,

 



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