Story of Vantage Point

March 3, 2011
By ISayWeCuddleNow PLATINUM, Bartlett, Illinois
ISayWeCuddleNow PLATINUM, Bartlett, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
This isn't my favorite, but it's a good quote...

"The world needs Christians who don't tolerate the complacency of their own lives." - Crazy Love


Summary:

What happens when a homeless mother and daughter walk into a local grocery store? What goes through their minds? What goes through the minds of those they encounter? Why do we think what we do, say what we do, act how we act?


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Story of Vantage Point


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on Mar. 17 2011 at 12:54 pm
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg

I love it, please keep writting more, I wanna find out what happens to the woman and her daughter. <3

on Mar. 4 2011 at 6:41 pm
rainbowwaffles BRONZE, Stony Brook, New York
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It's actually the top voted novel of the day, or if you go to realistic fiction section, then top voted, it should be number four.

The advanced search button doesn't work, I've tried it before...


on Mar. 4 2011 at 6:27 pm
ISayWeCuddleNow PLATINUM, Bartlett, Illinois
21 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
This isn't my favorite, but it's a good quote...

"The world needs Christians who don't tolerate the complacency of their own lives." - Crazy Love

Actually, I'm having trouble finding your story. I searched the title "the formation" and your username "rainbowwaffles"

on Mar. 4 2011 at 6:22 pm
ISayWeCuddleNow PLATINUM, Bartlett, Illinois
21 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
This isn't my favorite, but it's a good quote...

"The world needs Christians who don't tolerate the complacency of their own lives." - Crazy Love

Thanks so much! That's super encouraging to me!!! I'll check out your story. Again, thanks for the comment.

on Mar. 4 2011 at 2:44 pm
rainbowwaffles BRONZE, Stony Brook, New York
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Oh, my gosh, I LOVE this!!! Your writing is great, and there are no grammatical or punctuation errors at all either. I really like how you wrote in the different POVs, something a lot of writers struggle with, including me. I have a realistic fiction novel up called The Formation with different POVs, so if you wanna check it out and give me some advice, please do. Thanks :)


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