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Story of Vantage Point

ISayWeCuddleNow
Story of Vantage Point
Summary: What happens when a homeless mother and daughter walk into a local grocery store? What goes through their minds? What goes through the minds of those they encounter? Why do we think what we do, say what we do, act how we act?



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Vanendra said...
Mar. 17, 2011 at 12:54 pm
I love it, please keep writting more, I wanna find out what happens to the woman and her daughter. <3
 
rainbowwaffles said...
Mar. 4, 2011 at 2:44 pm
Oh, my gosh, I LOVE this!!! Your writing is great, and there are no grammatical or punctuation errors at all either. I really like how you wrote in the different POVs, something a lot of writers struggle with, including me. I have a realistic fiction novel up called The Formation with different POVs, so if you wanna check it out and give me some advice, please do. Thanks :)
 
ISayWeCuddleNow replied...
Mar. 4, 2011 at 6:22 pm
Thanks so much! That's super encouraging to me!!! I'll check out your story. Again, thanks for the comment.
 
ISayWeCuddleNow replied...
Mar. 4, 2011 at 6:27 pm
Actually, I'm having trouble finding your story. I searched the title "the formation" and your username "rainbowwaffles"
 
rainbowwaffles replied...
Mar. 4, 2011 at 6:41 pm

It's actually the top voted novel of the day, or if you go to realistic fiction section, then top voted, it should be number four.

The advanced search button doesn't work, I've tried it before...

 

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