Don't Touch Me

January 25, 2011
By 2-Is-Better-Than-1 BRONZE, Mayfield, Ohio
2-Is-Better-Than-1 BRONZE, Mayfield, Ohio
3 articles 1 photo 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass, it's about learning to dance in the rain"


Summary:

While Jayden tries to keep a secret past, Jon tries to uncover it. In the process the two become close.. but how close is too close for Jayden? How much can she trust? What does she have to lose?


Savannah F.

Don't Touch Me


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on Feb. 2 2011 at 4:11 pm
2-Is-Better-Than-1 BRONZE, Mayfield, Ohio
3 articles 1 photo 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass, it's about learning to dance in the rain"

I'd look at your book but i don't know what it's called

on Feb. 2 2011 at 3:52 pm
2-Is-Better-Than-1 BRONZE, Mayfield, Ohio
3 articles 1 photo 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass, it's about learning to dance in the rain"

I am not mad at you... I know this book needs work... but just because people aren't viewing  your book doesn't mean you need to bash on mine... I have written short stories as well

bigdreamer14 said...
on Feb. 1 2011 at 3:44 pm
bigdreamer14, Y Ya Need To Know???, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
You can say that I'm a talented writer, but all I can do is write down my feelings on paper and form them into sentences with my own personal flavor.

Okay...well... I really don't know what to say about this. Everyone is telling you how great it is, and I'm only trying to be real here, and I have to say it's not that amazing. I feel like you can go more indepth with it because it seems like it has potential but I'm not getting it. I have to say though, it kinda seems like my own book but that's all I'm going to say. You have to read it to find out (and for some reason, all the quotes and everything are meshed together and unorganized and Im guessing that's why people wont read... and it wasn't even my fault =( )

But anyways, I think you should just make it a short story instead because I think you might be more successful with it that way.


on Jan. 30 2011 at 2:53 pm
2-Is-Better-Than-1 BRONZE, Mayfield, Ohio
3 articles 1 photo 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass, it's about learning to dance in the rain"

Thanks, I will check out your book too (:

on Jan. 30 2011 at 12:54 am
Timekeeper DIAMOND, Cary, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"A guy walks up to me and asks 'What's Punk?'. So I kick over a garbage can and say 'That's punk!'. So he kicks over a garbage can and says 'That's Punk'?, and I say 'No that's trendy'!"- Billie Joe Armstrong, Green Day

This book rocks!  I thougth the pacing was just right, especially for the tone of the story. Please write more.

Please check out my novel SuperNOVA and leave your thoughts. Thanks :D


on Jan. 29 2011 at 4:13 pm
2-Is-Better-Than-1 BRONZE, Mayfield, Ohio
3 articles 1 photo 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass, it's about learning to dance in the rain"

Yeah, I need to work at that. I just dont like itwhen an author spends to much time with detail because then the book gets boring.. but thanks for the feed back (:

on Jan. 28 2011 at 4:24 pm
Internal-Love PLATINUM, Queens, New York
33 articles 3 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nothing's black or white, its all just a shade of gray---

















TI "Live your Life" ft Rihanna

WONDERFUL!!! Write more!!

on Jan. 28 2011 at 3:53 pm
CrazyWriter GOLD, Lorton Station, Virginia
16 articles 2 photos 102 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Once you have given up on the most important thing in your life, you begin to die, because then, you gradually lose your true self"~Hana Kimi
"Someone who can lie to themself. . . is lonely, and in pain"~Hana Kimi

I like it though i think its a little too fast...keep it going though

~CRazYwRITeR~

 



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