THE PEASANT GIRL

December 12, 2010
By Anonymous

Summary:

Prince Caerus of Cariden is forced into an engagement with the Princess of a new world-power threatening to conquer his country. He has almost resigned himself to his fate when he stumbles across a strange peasant girl, who changes his perception of everything from life and death, beauty and ugliness, right and wrong, and love and hate.


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THE PEASANT GIRL


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on Sep. 16 2013 at 10:24 am
TanazMasaba GOLD, Dhaka, Other
16 articles 10 photos 214 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You've gotta dance like there's nobody watching,
Love like you'll never be hurt,
Sing like there's nobody listening,
And live like it's Heaven on Earth."













---William W. Purkey

I love this story! when will you post more???

on Aug. 14 2013 at 3:37 pm
ChristineK GOLD, SLC, Utah
17 articles 3 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
“So the future seemed
To mingle with the past. For a short space
I saw revealed to the doubt the threads that bind
This little speck of time we call “To-day”
To the great cycle of unending life
That has been and that shall be evermore.”
-Tours

LOVE your characterization!! So good. :)

on Dec. 27 2011 at 9:03 pm
SilentWords SILVER, Beavercreek, Ohio
5 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"Crying is not a weakness. You've done it since the day you were born. It means you are alive." Author unknown

Please write more!

I_Love_Books said...
on Jun. 10 2011 at 6:54 pm
Lol :O i DID xDD

on Jun. 10 2011 at 8:50 am
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg

YOU BOOK STALKER!!!! >.>

 

you stole my job D;


I_Love_Books said...
on Apr. 29 2011 at 1:18 pm
I_Love_Books, Tukwila, Washington
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I'm stalkinq your book too much :(

-IT'S SO GOOD (((:


I_Love_Books said...
on Apr. 29 2011 at 1:03 pm
I_Love_Books, Tukwila, Washington
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Please hurry and write more becuase I'm about to die (not litterally xD)

-It's so good ! (:


I_Love_Books said...
on Apr. 29 2011 at 12:56 pm
I_Love_Books, Tukwila, Washington
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Your book rules ;d

on Apr. 27 2011 at 10:19 pm
dreamer759 SILVER, San Ramon, California
5 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I know, right?"
(you know you say it)

This is really good. The world you've created is so real. I love Caerus. He's a flawed person that I can't help but root for

on Apr. 27 2011 at 7:40 pm
MasterZone BRONZE, Toronto, Other
2 articles 0 photos 39 comments

  I think that one part of the story can be improved (Chapter 4):

  “Well,” Onaje’ said after Caerus didn’t speak for several moments. “She’s in perfect health, except for being malnourished, of course. If you don’t mind, I have other patients to attend to.”

 

  For that paragraph in the story, it said how a person is in perfect health when she was malnourished. That is just medically incorrect. You can say that a person is in perfect health, but with a cut, a buise, or a cold; you can't say malnourished.

  Malnourishment causes so much damage to the health of a person and is a very serious health concern that could lead to many more severe problems.

  Something else should have been written instead of what you wrote in the story, simply because it would be more medically accurate.


Some O said...
on Apr. 27 2011 at 6:00 pm
PLEASE FINISH THIS BOOK, ITS ROCKS ;D

on Apr. 5 2011 at 1:52 am
everything_shane BRONZE, Manila, Florida
2 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't rush things. Good things will come to those who wait.

I agree :) cool story.. i love to read it :)

Magyk32 said...
on Apr. 3 2011 at 12:07 pm
Magyk32, Ypsilanti, Michigan
0 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
Every man dies. Not every man really lives.
~Anonymous

when are you going to finish this? I really really liked it.

Magyk32 said...
on Apr. 3 2011 at 12:05 pm
Magyk32, Ypsilanti, Michigan
0 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
Every man dies. Not every man really lives.
~Anonymous

PLEASE PLEASE WRITE MORE!!! DON'T QUIT NOW!

on Mar. 14 2011 at 5:13 pm
Lilybird SILVER, Lexington, Massachusetts
8 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
sometimes you put up walls not to keep people out, but to see who cares to break them down.

This is an amazing start! Please write more! I am very curious about what will happen next!!! :)

on Mar. 3 2011 at 3:07 pm
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
1 article 76 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg

Why did you have to make your story soooooo good?     >:(     I hope you post more chapters soon!

on Feb. 20 2011 at 8:45 pm
SilentlyRising GOLD, Decatur, Georgia
13 articles 0 photos 100 comments

Favorite Quote:
"My pen is the barrel of the gun. Remind me which side you should be on."

It's really good!  I'm guessing the little girl is the Pesant Girl...?  I thought she would turn into a love interest.  Darn.  Maybe there's still hope in an older sister.  The mysterious Keona, perhaps?  I don't know--you're the author!  ;)  Write on!

on Jan. 29 2011 at 2:17 pm
stellabella21 BRONZE, Cambridge, Massachusetts
1 article 1 photo 22 comments
is is really good!

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on Dec. 26 2010 at 11:18 am
Keilah GOLD, Eureka, Missouri
18 articles 10 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I used to have an open mind, but my brains kept falling out."

 Why aren't there any paragraphs in the second chapter?

on Dec. 26 2010 at 10:50 am
CrazyWriter GOLD, Lorton Station, Virginia
16 articles 2 photos 102 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Once you have given up on the most important thing in your life, you begin to die, because then, you gradually lose your true self"~Hana Kimi
"Someone who can lie to themself. . . is lonely, and in pain"~Hana Kimi

Proving me worng.......keep it going... 5 stars


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