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Beautiful Eyes

Audra B.
Beautiful Eyes
Summary: I don't wanna give away the plot...mwahahahaha

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Bones96 said...
Apr. 24, 2012 at 11:57 pm
I really like the begining to this but I can't seem to go past the prolog.
loveshortstuff11 said...
Sept. 27, 2011 at 8:43 pm
I posted several new chapters, so if you want to read the rest, it will be up as soon as the editors approve it! Thanks for reading :)
loveshortstuff11 said...
Sept. 27, 2011 at 9:08 am
This is set around the 1850-1870's-ish...
Steph0804 said...
Sept. 26, 2011 at 11:35 pm
I like this a lot! The story is really cute and humorous... but I have a question. Where exactly is this situated? like, the time period?
loveshortstuff11 replied...
Nov. 14, 2011 at 9:43 pm
It is supposed to be set right around the turn of the century, like 1890's
writeamongthestarsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 19, 2011 at 7:40 pm
I have carrot-red hair, a long nose, and a lot of freckles. lol... thanks.
loveshortstuff11 replied...
Sept. 22, 2011 at 7:10 pm
lol...sorry! Not trying to offend...my character just doesn't like her sister. I actually really like red hair, and freckles are cool. :)
Eno-Bladez said...
Sept. 19, 2011 at 4:57 pm
i loved reading this i read up to the second chapter before i was brutally kicked off the computer. right now all i have time to do is comment on this then i'm going to have to get on again :P i really liked reading this.
loveshortstuff11 replied...
Sept. 22, 2011 at 7:10 pm
lol nice...stupid computer. I hope that you like the rest though :)
rubyrose1 replied...
Sept. 27, 2011 at 9:52 am
I  thought your story so far was so cute.  I cant wait to hear more about what happens when they meet up after mass. One thing I would recommend is putting it into paragraph form and kinda separating it out, its bit hard to read all together.  Just a few grammar mistakes, but I cant wait for you to continue with it! Good job:)
loveshortstuff11 replied...
Sept. 27, 2011 at 8:33 pm
Thanks for your comments! I should post the next couple of chapters so that you can find out what happens next lol :)

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