Beautiful Eyes

September 14, 2011
By loveshortstuff11, Rush, Colorado
loveshortstuff11, Rush, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"Never meddle in the affairs of dragons, for you are crunchy and good with ketchup."


Summary:

I don't wanna give away the plot...mwahahahaha


Audra B.

Beautiful Eyes


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Bones96 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 24 2012 at 11:57 pm
Bones96 BRONZE, Charlotte, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Life isn't about finding yourself it's about creating yourself-

I really like the begining to this but I can't seem to go past the prolog.

on Nov. 14 2011 at 9:43 pm
loveshortstuff11, Rush, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"Never meddle in the affairs of dragons, for you are crunchy and good with ketchup."

It is supposed to be set right around the turn of the century, like 1890's

on Sep. 27 2011 at 8:43 pm
loveshortstuff11, Rush, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"Never meddle in the affairs of dragons, for you are crunchy and good with ketchup."

I posted several new chapters, so if you want to read the rest, it will be up as soon as the editors approve it! Thanks for reading :)

on Sep. 27 2011 at 8:33 pm
loveshortstuff11, Rush, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"Never meddle in the affairs of dragons, for you are crunchy and good with ketchup."

Thanks for your comments! I should post the next couple of chapters so that you can find out what happens next lol :)

on Sep. 27 2011 at 9:52 am
rubyrose1 BRONZE, Oxford, Mississippi
2 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams." -Eleanor Roosevelt

I  thought your story so far was so cute.  I cant wait to hear more about what happens when they meet up after mass. One thing I would recommend is putting it into paragraph form and kinda separating it out, its bit hard to read all together.  Just a few grammar mistakes, but I cant wait for you to continue with it! Good job:)

on Sep. 27 2011 at 9:08 am
loveshortstuff11, Rush, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"Never meddle in the affairs of dragons, for you are crunchy and good with ketchup."

This is set around the 1850-1870's-ish...

Steph0804 GOLD said...
on Sep. 26 2011 at 11:35 pm
Steph0804 GOLD, Seoul, Other
12 articles 4 photos 206 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Explaining a joke is like dissecting a frog: you understand it better, but the frog dies in the process." -E.B. White

I like this a lot! The story is really cute and humorous... but I have a question. Where exactly is this situated? like, the time period?

on Sep. 22 2011 at 7:10 pm
loveshortstuff11, Rush, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"Never meddle in the affairs of dragons, for you are crunchy and good with ketchup."

lol nice...stupid computer. I hope that you like the rest though :)

on Sep. 22 2011 at 7:10 pm
loveshortstuff11, Rush, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"Never meddle in the affairs of dragons, for you are crunchy and good with ketchup."

lol...sorry! Not trying to offend...my character just doesn't like her sister. I actually really like red hair, and freckles are cool. :)

on Sep. 19 2011 at 7:40 pm
writeamongthestars BRONZE, Portland, Oregon
4 articles 0 photos 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Laughter is timeless. Imagination has no age. And dreams are forever." - Walt Disney Company

I have carrot-red hair, a long nose, and a lot of freckles. lol... thanks.

on Sep. 19 2011 at 4:57 pm
Eno_Bladez GOLD, Williamsport, Pennsylvania
16 articles 1 photo 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
it'll be okay, if it's not okay it's not over.

i loved reading this i read up to the second chapter before i was brutally kicked off the computer. right now all i have time to do is comment on this then i'm going to have to get on again :P i really liked reading this.


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